Arc II, Chapter 48: The Murder House
Excerpt from a Carousel Atlas
The Soundstage
It seems strange that there is no entry on this despite the term being so widely used in the Atlas.
Mos... 2024-03-12 06:36:58 +0000 UTC View Post
The Soundstage
It seems strange that there is no entry on this despite the term being so widely used in the Atlas.
Mos... 2024-03-12 06:36:58 +0000 UTC View Post
Antoine laid back on the overstuffed chair I had grown fond of in our time at the hilltop suite that had once been Jedediah Geist’s home. Every few moments, it looked like Antoine was about to get up and go somewhere else, but he didn’t.
We sat and had the same conversation we had been ...
2024-03-10 07:59:28 +0000 UTC View Post“One at a time,” Madam Celia said firmly from the doorway of her shop. She had been waiting for us. The elegant dress she had been wearing in the t...
2024-03-07 10:08:23 +0000 UTC View Post“Come here, boy,” Bobby said. “You can do it!”
The tall wolfhound from the Permanent Vacancy B&B stepped over the boundary they were previously unable to cross. It joyously hurled itself into Bobby’s arms. Bobby looked happy. That’s all that mattered.
We had trekked ac...
2024-03-04 05:04:55 +0000 UTC View PostDays passed while we waited at the hotel suite that had once been Jed Geist’s home.
Kurt Willis, the GI Paragon, had told my friends to wait a couple of weeks or so before pursuing the next storyline.
Weeks.
That didn’t match up with what I knew about the Tutorial at all—n...
2024-03-02 05:48:32 +0000 UTC View PostThe Tutorial will soon be done, and the world will start opening back up. I know two of the stories that will be featured in the next book after the Tutorial, but I was wondering what kind of stuff you might want to see. It can be anything from a genre to a trope type. Just leave it in the commen...
2024-03-01 02:25:50 +0000 UTC View PostThe needle on the Plot Cycle was nearly to The End. I thought about crawling toward Isaac, but then I thought better of it. His Dead indicator was blinking longer and longer. He was unconscious. The only thing that approaching him might do was wake him up. That would only cause him to suffer.
... 2024-02-28 06:22:18 +0000 UTC View Post“You asked about Simon Halle,” he said. “How do you know that name?”
I had asked. He had not answered me at the time. I suspected that the script had been the reason. Now, both of us Written Off in a dark tunnel, the script didn’t appear to be stopping him.
“I met him a fe...
2024-02-26 01:20:45 +0000 UTC View PostLillian Geist closed the distance across the office toward Halle in a matter of seconds. They had the same Plot Armor, but I had to imagine that hers was more geared toward melee than Halle’s.
“You did this to me!” she screamed. “Tell me why!”
She grabbed him and quickly thr...
2024-02-23 05:39:56 +0000 UTC View PostHere it was, the villain monologue. I had seen them before but never like this.
But this time, something was different. We were not consistently On-Screen as she spoke, and more than that, it felt like her speech was not happening in the moment despite the words coming from Lillian’s mout...
2024-02-21 04:53:59 +0000 UTC View PostWe moved as quickly toward the hospital as we possibly could. Isaac was slowing us down. He was bleeding out. Unfortunately because of his sedation and the tropes that he had equipped it was nearly impossible to tell exactly how close he was to death.
A few times I actually thought he had d...
2024-02-19 06:39:27 +0000 UTC View PostThe book's launch has fried my brain a bit so I haven't gotten the chapters out in a timely manner. I apologize.
The current storyline will be finished by the end of the weekend and then you'll finally get to see what's in store for Riley and the gang. Now that I have some runway in front o...
2024-02-16 02:40:01 +0000 UTC View PostThe Game at Carousel Book One: The Bystander is live on Amazon. If you want the print version or audiobook, those are both available too. If you do get the book...
2024-02-14 04:11:47 +0000 UTC View Post“What are our characters’ motivations?” Kimberly asked.
“Good question,” I said.
I thought for a moment. There were countless movies where things like motivations were dropped leading to the conclusion of the story. By that point, the audience is usually invested enough to n...
2024-02-14 04:04:37 +0000 UTC View Post“Everyone grab a scalpel,” Antoine suggested. He dumped the contents of a drawer that had been filled with the little metal surgical implements wrapped in protective wax paper onto a cold metal table. “I have a feeling we’re going to need something sharp soon.”
A cackle came...
2024-02-10 00:42:41 +0000 UTC View PostFor a while, it was just me and Cecilia On-Screen. She talked in circles. At first, I thought she was just redoing lines to get a better take for Carousel, but then I started to suspect that she was lacking some of her higher faculties.
“When Howard fixes me, I think I will run for Miss C...
2024-02-07 06:11:59 +0000 UTC View Post“You may need that gadget after all because there is no way in hell I’m swallowing that thing,” I said, I said, staring at the wiggling tadpole.
Dr. Halle was none too pleased. He didn’t grab for the bolus gun. Instead, he grabbed a tool from the table that a demented dentist might ...
2024-02-03 20:03:47 +0000 UTC View PostI carefully scanned the area ahead, making sure to keep the mental image of Isaac in my mind so that I could see which way he was being taken.
A flood of self-doubt and shame moved over me as I began contemplating how my plan had failed that badly. Was it Cassie’s Foreboding Signs...
2024-02-02 00:00:28 +0000 UTC View PostOnce Doctor Halle was gone, we went Off-Screen.
Willis started to clap. “Things are moving right along. Been a while since I had to change my shorts in a story before,” he said with a grin. “Speaking of, you guys know what's next?”
We somberly looked around at each other and n...
2024-01-30 08:20:59 +0000 UTC View PostFinally, the NPCs started to pack things away and break down the room. We were ready for the next scene. The tables of food were being packed up and taken somewhere in the distance. The sad part was that Bobby's Craft Services Are The Real Heroes trope had likely played some part...
2024-01-28 05:37:28 +0000 UTC View Post“Do you have any idea who might have wanted Jedediah Geist dead?” Antoine asked. He wasn’t going to waste any time beating around the bush.
Dr. Howard Halle smiled. “In fact, I do. His whole family bore one grudge or another, but as they all famously predeceased him, that might not ...
2024-01-25 05:39:37 +0000 UTC View PostQuestioning Dr. Howard Halle was coincidentally very easy. All it took was a call to the number on his business card to find out that he was at an event at Hallowed Heart Hospital just up t...
2024-01-23 04:59:21 +0000 UTC View PostThe ebook pre-order is live!
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Player Tropes:
(I would like to remind readers that this is a reference. I will describe tropes before they come up. You don’t have to read this unless you want to)
Just checking in to announce that the Audible Pre-Order is now Live. If you have been one of the readers who have been waiting for the audiobook, the time is near!
2024-01-10 00:22:31 +0000 UTC View PostWe're coming up on the next storyline and I am excited to show you what's in store, both in terms of the storyline itself and the revelations about how the Throughline works and the path forward.
At this time, I have a draft due on Friday for Book II and I need to spend every waking hour go...
2024-01-08 05:52:02 +0000 UTC View PostThat was the first night in a while that I was able to use my instant sleeping trope all to myself. That was fortunate, as every noise in the suite jolted me awake with thoughts of ghouls and ghosts. I woke up early and sat around in one of the chairs in the living room, planning what I thought w...
2024-01-07 03:09:00 +0000 UTC View PostI need some time to get my killer frogs in a row. I was intending to release tonight, but it's not ready. Remember, I will still get your chapters to you.
Right now I am in the process of finishing the draft of Book Two for my publisher so I am super busy. Book Two will feature two new stor...
2024-01-05 05:29:52 +0000 UTC View PostBack to the resort we went. We were all anxious about finding the spirits of the dead there, but it was clear that we were meant to return to Jed Geist's old home, now the largest, fanciest hotel suite I had ever been in.
Since we had triggered the time capsule scene earlier this time, ther...
2024-01-02 00:24:06 +0000 UTC View Post