Part 9 (WIP)
Added 2021-04-16 05:12:11 +0000 UTC
PAGE ONE
Pane One: Becky is getting dressed and wearing a long dress that barely goes past her belly.
Becky: “I remember when I first got this dress, it was so long on me and now it looks like a shirt. Oh boys, look what you’re doing to me.”
Panel Two: Her hand is on her belly and she looks happy.
Becky: “While all of you were a surprise your dad and I tried for so long to have just one of you. And now we have one baby for every year we’ve been married.”
Panel Three: Becky has tears running down her face but she’s still smiling happily while she rubs her belly.
Becky: “It was so hard seeing all of those negative tests over the years and feeling so hopeless.”
Panel Four: (FLASHBACK) Becky and Jamal are walking together and are holding hands, she’s looking over at a woman carrying her baby in her arms.
Becky Speech Bubble: “Seeing all of those happy mom’s with their children and thinking that I would never be able to feel that same love.”
Panel Five: Becky is on her laptop
Becky Speech Bubble: “And I hated going on social media for the longest.”
Panel Six: On the screen there is a picture of a man pointing at his wife’s big belly and he has a wide smile. A woman is holding a felt board that says, “One More Week Left”
Becky: “I tried to feel so happy for my friends but after a while it became so hard.”
PAGE TWO
Panel One: Becky is sitting up in her bed, the room is dark and the light from the moon is shining on her and she’s crying.
Becky: “And no matter how low I felt…”
Panel Two: (POV FRONT VIEW) Jamal’s arm is around her shoulder while she’s still crying.
Becky: “And no matter how broken my heart was…”
Panel Three: Jamal is holding Becky in his arms, her head is laying on his chest.
Becky: “You dad was always there for me to put the pieces back together.”
Panel Four: Becky and Jamal look like they're in their early teens and holding hands while they’re walking through the hallway in a school.
Becky: “I’ve known your dad since I was thirteen and he was fourteen and he’s always been my best friend.”
Panel Five: Teenage Becky is standing behind her dad. Her dad is a bald man with a mustache and a button up shirt. Becky has a frown on her face.
Becky: “Your grandpa wasn’t to happy I was with your dad.”
Panel Six: Jamal is in a muscle car with big tires and a loud exhaust. There's smoke coming from the tires as he’s doing a burnout in front of Becky’s house. He’s wearing sunglasses
Becky: “And a part of that was definitely your dads fault, he was such a show off when he was younger. But I know he was just trying to impress me.”
PAGE THREE
Panel One: Jamal is proposing to Becky and she looks so surprised
Becky: “And he impressed me so much that I had no choice but to say yes. It was the only thing I wanted to say. I never thought I would be married when I was nineteen.”
Panel Two: Becky and Jamal are arguing
Becky: “Things weren’t always perfect.”
Panel Three: Becky and Jamal are hugging.
Becky: “But we could never stay mad at each other no matter what happened.”
Panel Four (SPLIT):
SPLIT ONE: Becky is holding a pillow as she’s standing in front of a mirror and Jamal is putting on a shirt.
SPLIT TWO: She has the pillow under her shirt to make it look like she’s pregnant and she’s showing off her look to Jamal. He has hearts all around him.
Becky: “Once we got older we both knew something was missing.”
Panel Five: (POV) Becky is holding a positive pregnancy test
Becky: “And after so many years of trying you all came along.”
Panel Six: Jamal has Agent 069 bent over the desk and he’s fucking her hard.
Becky: “Your dad and I are so happy that you all will be here before we know it. And I know your dad will be great! Because I know that our love is something that can never be broken.”
PAGE FOUR
Panel One: Becky is waddling over to her nightstand that is next to her bed.
Becky: “And speaking of your grandpa…”
Panel Two: The screen on Becky’s phone says, “Calling...Mom & Dad House”
Panel Three: Becky’s face looks very happy while she’s on the phone as she’s holding her belly.
Becky: “Hey momma!”
Becky’s Mom: “Oh sweetheart I haven’t heard from you in so long. Is everything okay? How’s my girl doing? Are you alright?”
Panel Four: Becky looks a little nervous while she’s on the phone.
Becky: “Sorry about that momma, things have just been very...crazy...which is why I’m calling you now. Momma...I’m pregnant.”
Panel Five: Becky is holding the phone away from her ear because her mom is screaming with joy. Becky’s still smiling.
Becky’s Mom: “Oh my goodness my sugar plum is having a baby! Richard! Richard! Come here Becky’s on the phone!”
Becky: “Momma! Momma! Hold on its not just one baby.”
Panel Six: Becky has the phone back to her ear.
Becky: “It’s octuplets.”
Becky’s Mom: “Oct...what?”
Becky: “I’m now twenty-six weeks with eight momma...hello?...Momma you there?”
PAGE FIVE
Page One: Becky looks confused while she’s still on the phone
Becky: “Momma you there?”
Becky’s Dad: “Sugarplum is that you? What happened to your mom? She fainted...are you okay? What’s going on?”
Panel Two: Becky looks surprised.
Becky: “Oh no! Is she okay?”
Becky’s Dad: “She’s waking up now hold on sugar plum...Martha what are you talking about?...Eight?...Eight what?”
Panel Three: Becky is still on the phone as she’s walking out of the room with her hand on her back to support her big belly.
Becky: “Well she passed out because I told her she was going to be a gramma to eight babies.”
Becky’s Dad: “Oh goodness sugar plum why did you adopt so many? I know you have a big heart but adopting eight kids at once is quite a hassle. Very funny sugar plum!”
Panel Four: Becky is now walking down the stairs, she looks like she’s struggling to balance her big belly as she walks.
Becky: “Daddy it’s far from a joke, trust me they’re heavy to carry around already...surprise!”
Panel Five: Becky sighs
Becky’s Dad: “Sweetie...are you...Oh I get it, April fools! You got us!”
Becky: “Daddy did you ever figure out how to use that smartphone?”
Becky’s Dad: “Oh finally that dag on blasted thing had me all…”
Becky: “Go get it real fast.”
Panel Six: Becky takes a selfie and she gets all her belly into the frame.
PAGE SIX
Panel One: Becky has her phone in her hand. The phone screen says, “Speaker On” “Picture Message Sent”
Becky: “I just sent you something daddy, I will know when you get it.”
Becky’s Dad: “Yup, I just heard my phone go off...be right back sugar plum let me go get it. I think your mother is awake now.”
Panel Two: Becky accidentally drops her phone.
Panel Three: She’s struggling to bend down and is grunting.
Becky: “Oh damn it...come on girl you can get it.”
Panel Four: POV of Becky’s ass as she’s bending down, her belly is showing from under her dress and she’s closer to her phone since she’s squatting down.
Becky: *Grunting*
Becky’s Dad: “Oh sugar honey ice tea! My plum is...is plump! Sweetheart when are you due!? What...what’s that noise?”
Panel Five: Becky has her phone in her hand and is struggling to stand back up, the phone is still on speaker.
Becky: “Sorry daddy. I dropped my phone. It was a struggle to bend down to get it. And to answer your question I’m only twenty-six weeks. I’m just a bit bloated from eating earlier.”
Becky’s Dad: “Oh no plum that’s all baby, not bloat...wait...struggling...where the hell is Jamal? Why isn’t he helping you?”
Panel Six: Becky is rolling her eyes.
Becky: “I’m fine daddy. I’m pregnant, not disabled and he’s at the gym.”
PAGE SEVEN
Panel One: Becky’s phone is yelling.
Becky’s Dad: “You mean to tell me my daughter is at home struggling and he’s just...just...dicking around at the gym!?”
Becky: “No daddy he owns one, remember?”
Becky’s Dad: “Okay well he has staff there I bet. He should be at home helping...I swear I told you about him...I...no Martha I’m not saying...well no...okay here.”
Panel Two: Becky is grabbing her car keys from off of the key hook and she has her purse on her shoulder.
Becky’s Mom: “I’m sorry Becky you know how your father can get. And I just saw the picture you’re ready to pop already! Why didn’t you tell us sooner?”
Becky: “Well they say you should wait until your twelve weeks. But since we’re expecting so many I thought we should wait until much later. You know...just in case.”
Panel Three: Becky is waddling to their new minivan
Becky’s Mom: “Now I don’t mean to intrude but we will come to town next Saturday. I have to see my plump little plum. Oh goodness a grandma to eight, so exciting! I have to go and calm your father down see you soon dear. Love you bunches!” *Phone hangs up*
Panel Four: Becky is crammed in the seat behind the steering wheel because her belly is in the way and the seat is slowly sliding back so she can fit.
Becky: “Sure mom see you soon I guess. I better let Jamal know.”
Panel Five: Jamal is holding his phone, POV angle of him waist up. His message reads, “My parents are coming to town next week I just told them the news...sorry!”
Panel Six: POV of Jamal’s pants are down and his huge dick is finally soft, there’s cum all over the place and he’s leaning on the door and sweating.
Jamal: “Well...fuck.”
PAGE EIGHT
Panel One: Becky is driving in the minivan and is thinking to herself. There’s a bulge on her belly from one of the babies kicking.
Thought Bubble: “Gosh. My dad really needs to calm down with how much he doesn’t like Jamal. He’s always picked at every little thing he’s done but now he really needs to lighten up since we have the boys on the way.
Panel Two: (X-RAY POV of her belly) The babies are moving around
Thought Bubble: It’s going to be quite a bumpy ride but your dad and I are ready! I think.
Panel Three: The van pulls up in front of a baby outlet store.
Panel Four: Becky is inside and is looking at the price of a crib, there is a woman nearby that is pregnant but her belly isn’t as big and she’s wearing a Hoppers shirt and she has large breasts. (Hoppers is a parody of Hooters)
Becky: “This one’s cute...let’s see...times that by eight...that will be around twenty-three hundred dollars for eight cribs. And that’s the cheapest one they have. I guess that will do.”
Panel Five: The Hoppers stripper is now talking to Becky.
Stripper: “You’re right this one is cute, does the tag say if it comes in grey? Or is it just this white?”
Becky: “It looks like it comes in black, grey and white.”
Stripper: “Oh sweet! I have to get one of these.”
Panel Six: Becky is looking at the stripper’s Hoppers shirt and her large breasts that are starting to lactate.
Becky: “Hoppers, is that the restaurant down on Main Street?”
Stripper: “Oh yes it is you’re the first person to call it that! Are you applying? I can get you in and believe it or not men would love to see you serve them some wings or on stage. You would kill it!”
Becky: “Stage?”
Stripper: “Yes! We’re also a strip club but I can’t complain the food is so good too. This little one really loves some wings and fried pickles.”
PAGE NINE
Panel One: Becky looks nervous
Becky: “Oh no, no...I could never do something like that...especially with all those people looking at me.”
Stripper: “Girl don’t be afraid to embrace what you’ve got belly or not I think you’re cute as a button.”
Panel Two: Becky is blushing
Becky: “Well thank you, my husband, hasn’t even said that to me in a while.”
Stripper: “Well girl let me tell you something don’t let that get you down and show him that you’re still a lioness.”
Becky: “Thanks I guess I could give it a try I did buy some lingerie not too long ago.”
Stripper: “Then wear it like a queen and show your man what you’re working with! Don’t be afraid to roar momma!”