Baby Overload (Storyline): Part 4 and 5
Added 2020-08-28 21:47:39 +0000 UTC
PART 4:
Artist: Unknown (prob Boom970)
PAGE ONE:
Panel One: * Both Becky and Jamal wake up terrified in their beds, it’s morning. *
Panel Two: * Jamal is reaching towards his head and notices that there aren’t any horns on his head. (show a dotted outline where the horns would have been.)
Panel Three: *Becky removes her blanket and has her hand on her belly. Her PJ’s barely fit over them.
Becky: “Thank goodness you all are still in there.”
Panel Four: * They both say this at the same time * “I had a crazy dream.”
Panel Five: * Becky is looking at Jamal worryingly *
Becky: “I had a dream that the babies started growing like crazy and I gave birth to them all at a store.”
Panel Six: *Jamal doesn’t realize Becky is now looking at him angrily as he tells her his story.*
Jamal: “I had a dream that you were a huge cartoon cow and you just kept getting bigger!”
Becky: “Thanks Jamal…”
PAGE TWO:
Panel One: * Jamal is now standing up stretching and Becky is looking at how big he is flaccid and her face is in awe. *
Becky: “Wow your balls look heavy.”
Panel Two: * Jamal looks a bit sad.*
Jamal: “Sweetheart there’s actually something we need to talk about.”
Panel Three: * He’s now sitting on the bed next to Becky still naked. *
Jamal: “I don’t know what’s come over me…I love you so much…but…I cheated on you. I’m so sorry.”
Panel Four: * Becky looks a bit sad *
Becky: “I know you have and it’s my fault. She said this might happen.”
Panel Five: * Jamal is looking at Becky confused *
Jamal: “She? What are you talking about Becky?”
Panel Six: * Becky puts her hand on Jamal’s leg *
Becky: “I guess I need to start from the beginning.”
PAGE THREE:
Panel One: * Becky is laying on her back getting examined by her OBGYN in his office*
Narration Bubble: “I had another appointment with Dr. Moss and he was giving me the same speech all the other doctors have given us over the years. To just keep trying.”
Panel Two: * Dr. Moss is looking at an ultrasound screen. *
Dr. Moss: “Everything looks like it’s in order. And I see a mature follicle that looks ready as well. So when you get home I suggest intercourse with your husband tonight and the next day as well.”
Panel Three: * Becky is looking at the doctor worried *
Becky: “What if it doesn’t take again?”
Dr. Moss: “Then we can start you back on your medication. I know it was a bit rough for you last time but that would be our best option. Before you leave stop at the front desk there are something you need to sign.”
Panel Four: *Becky is at the front desk with a tear going down her cheek and a pregnant woman in the waiting room is looking at her. *
Becky: “Can I use your restroom?”
Nurse: “Ours is closed. But the public one is down the hallway and to the right.”
Panel Five: *Becky is in the bathroom still upset. She’s looking in the mirror while she’s washing her hands. The door is open and the pregnant woman is walking in. *
Panel Six: * The pregnant woman is close to Becky* (Frame: The camera angle should be close to the woman’s belly showing that’s the main thing that Becky is noticing.
Woman: “Hey hun, you got a second?”
Becky: “Sure I guess.”
PAGE FOUR:
Panel One: * The woman looks empathetic at Becky.”
Woman: “I don’t mean to pry hun, but I remember it wasn’t too long ago I was coming out of Dr. Moss doing the same thing. And now look at me.”
Panel Two: * Becky sighs *
Becky: “Yeah you’re hard to miss. No offense.”
Woman: “None taken, these two are quite heavy and will be here soon but that’s not what I wanted to talk to you about. I can help you.”
Panel Three: * The woman hands Becky the bottle of pills *
Woman: “If you’re just trying for one I suggest you take half half of the pink pill that’s inside of the bottle unless you want multiples. But these are mainly for your husband.”
Becky: “What do they do?”
Woman: “They will make your follicles mature faster and it will give your husband a huge boost too. It’s what we used. I got two bottles because I didn’t know I only needed one dose.”
Panel Four:
Becky: It’s Tempting but I’m not really looking to buy anything.”
Woman: “Oh, I’m not selling them to you. I’m giving them to you. One dose is all I needed so I want to pass on what worked for me. Just keep an eye on your husband with these.”
Panel Five: *Becky looks puzzled at the woman*
Becky: “Why is that? What will they do to him?”
Woman: “Well they may cause what’s called ultra-hypersexual syndrome, mega-spermia and some growth. Meaning that your husband will become uncontrollably horny, he will cum like a fire hose and he might get a little bigger. Just makes sure he takes no more than two.”
Panel Six:
Woman: “Just forgive him. And I recommend you get rid of them once you get pregnant. And more than likely it will happen tonight, that’s how fast these will work.”
Becky: “What happens if he takes too many?”
Woman: “Nothing. They’re organic, he will just be horny a lot but they also are a natural stress relief and if he likes to workout they really help with that. I have to get going now, I would say good luck but with those you won’t need luck.”
PAGE FIVE:
Panel One: * Becky is in her holding the pills in her hand, she’s looking inside the bottle and sees two pink pills. *
Panel Two: *Becky has both pink pills in her hand*
Becky: “Only take half unless you want multiples…I guess twins would be fine.”
Panel Three (Split):
Split one: * Becky takes her pills *
Split two: *Driving home*
Panel Four: * X-ray of Becky’s ovaries going crazy and releasing eggs *
Panel Five: *Becky is smiling and has her hand on her stomach*
Becky: “Oh my goodness…I think I feel them working.”
Panel Six: *Copy and paste the panel were Becky busts through the door with the pills for Jamal *
PAGE SIX: * Flash back ends *
Becky: “I should have told you what happened as well but I got caught up in the excitement of things and obviously they worked.”
Panel Two: * Frame of Jamal’s dick and balls *
Jamal: “I wish you would have told me this before. Look at my junk Becky. My balls are so big that jeans aren’t comfortable and I can literally feel them swelling if I don’t cum. And I don’t think my dick will even fit in you anymore.”
Panel Three: * Becky is looking at Jamal *
Becky: “You are pretty big I will admit that but I think you will fit just fine.”
Jamal: “I got a little bit bigger last night.”
Becky: “How?”
Jamal: “Mike and I got into a…disagreement…so I took another one to make sure I won the argument.
Panel Four:
Becky: “I want those pills back so I can flush them down the toilet.”
Jamal: “I don’t have them anymore, Mike stole them from the office and took them all.”
Panel Five:
Becky: “Well do you know where he’s at?”
Panel Six: *Mike is in a lab floating in a liquid chamber, his dick and balls are cartoony massive and he has on a face mask with an oxygen tube and is asleep.*
Narration bubble: “Nope. But wherever that asshole’s at I’m sure he’s doing just fine.”
PART FIVE:
Artist: Uknown
PAGE ONE:
Panel One: *Jamal is brushing his teeth and wrapped in a towel, Becky is taking a shower behind him with the curtain closed *
Becky: “I need to go and get some clothes today nothing fits anymore, wanna come?”
Jamal: “Sure.”
Panel Two: *Becky is getting out of the shower and Jamal is looking at her in the mirror. She looks super sexy and wet*
Panel Three (multi split) *Becky’s wet breasts / her belly / her wet butt *
Jamal: “My god you’re so sexy.”
Panel Three: *POV view of Becky looking down at her swollen breasts and belly*
Becky: “I don’t think I am, I’m huge, swollen, stretch marks are starting to show and I’m already huge. And I’m only going to get bigger.”
Panel Four: *Jamal is much closer to her*
Jamal: “Not only do I think you’re sexy as fuck. I think pregnancy looks exoctic on you, it makes me want to rub my hands all over you and never stop.”
Becky: “Prove it.”
Panel Five: (Three split panel) * Jamal towel bulge / dick sticking out from towel and limp / full hard and massive *
Panel Six: *Becky looks shocked at Jamal*
Becky: “Oh my...you’re...wow…”
Jamal: “I know it’s crazy right.”
PAGE TWO:
Panel One: * POV from Jamal: Becky is leaning over on the edge of the bed her ass and pussy are in clear view and she’s looking back at Jamal *
Becky: “Don’t go easy on me.”
Panel Two: * Jamal is cramming his dick in her and she’s really tight he is only half way in *
Becky: “Oh god it’s so fucking big!”
Jamal: “You did this to me now I have to punish you for it...take it Becky.”
Panel Three: * Jamal is pounding the shit out of her doggy style *
Becky: “Shit, fuck, fuuuuuck!”
Panel Four: *Becky is struggling to take Jamal, she’s pinned down, ass up and biting down on a pillow *
Jamal: “I heard pregnant pussy was the best...and they weren’t lying!”
Panel Five: * Jamal is laying on the bed and Becky is about to ride him cowgirl style *
Becky: “If I’m too heavy let me know.”
Jamal: “I’m so ready for you baby!”
Panel Six: *POV: Ass shot of Becky struggling to get all of his dick in*
PAGE THREE:
Panel One: * Becky’s big breasts are lactating onto her belly *
Panel Two: *POV: Jamals view of her belly *
Panel Three: * Profile shot of Becky on Jamal bouncing up and down *
Panel Four: *Becky gets more of Jamal in her and her wet pussy is making Jamals dick wet *
Panel Five: *Jamals balls swell *
Panel Six: *Jamal’s face is tight *
Jamal: Get up! I need to cum”
PAGE FOUR:
Panel One: * Becky is off of Jamal’s dick and he lets out a small rope of cum *
Panel Two: * Becky is on her knees and Jamal is in front of her, his face shows that he’s holding back. *
Becky: “Oh no you already came.”
Jamal: “Not even close!”
Panel Three (Split): *Becky puts her mouth on his dick to blow him / her cheeks expand, cum is blowing out of her mouth and her eyes are wide in shock *
Panel Four: * Jamal is blasting her in the face with cum *
Panel Five: * His cum is getting everywhere and all over her face, hair, breasts and belly *
Becky: “Of fuck this is too much!”
Jamal: “I’m almost done.”
Panel Six: *POV: Becky’s breasts and belly are covered with cum*
Becky: “I think I need to take another shower.”
PAGE FIVE:
Panel One: Scene: Momma 2 Be store front
Panel Two: *Becky is looking at clothes and as a woman who works at the store approaches her. *
Woman: “Hey momma welcome to Momma 2 Be, can I help you find anything?”
Becky: “Do you have anything that’s a bit more...stretchy?”
Woman: “Of course we do. It’s in our third trimester section, follow me.”
Panel Three: * Becky notices all of the pregnant women in the third trimester section and how big they are *
Woman: “I bet you can’t wait to finally have that baby, you are glowing girl!”
Becky: “Babies and I’ve got a long ways to go.”
Woman: “Oh goodness my sister had twins and girl let me tell you they can be quite a hand full.”
Panel Four: Frame: The woman looks shocked and is staring at Becky’s belly
Becky: “I’m only twenty two weeks with octuplets.”
Woman: “Holy fuck...I mean...I’m so sorry please forgive me that was so rude. I’m so sorry.”
Becky: “No offense taken, trust me I know the easiest part of this will be my pregnancy but we’re ready for them. I think.”
Panel Five: *Becky is looking at clothes and the only things that will fit are 40 week shirts. She then notices the lingerie section. *
Panel Six: *She’s holding a few lingerie clothes on her arm and sees the fitting room *
Becky: “Let’s try a few of these on.”