Wholesome Reading
Added 2020-10-09 22:13:22 +0000 UTCHere's page six that I just finished up. I don't want Baby Overload to just be porn, porn and more porn. But I also want it to have more flushed out characters and show that they love each other as well.
PAGE SIX:
Panel One: * Becky is wearing a small black thong and bra and is checking out herself in the mirror. But she frowns because she doesn’t like how she looks.
Panel Two: *Becky is trying on a two piece, the bra barely fits on her boobs and she’s looking at her butt in the mirror. She still looks upset.*
Becky: “And to think I’m only going to get bigger, I look horrible.”
Panel Three (split): *Becky is trying on a one piece lingerie suit and is holding her belly.* Frame two: *she exhales and rips the one piece.
Becky: “well I guess I’m buying this one.”
Panel Four (split): *Jamal is standing outside the changing room and hears Becky crying and his face is shocked.*
Frame two: *Jamal is close to the changing room door.*
Jamal: “Can I come in real quick sweetheart?”
Becky: “Sure I guess.”
Panel Five: *Jamal is looking at Becky, she has her hand on her belly and the other hand is fiddling with the tear. *
Jamal: “Becky I want to tell you something.
Panel Six: *He wipes away her tears.*
Jamal: “You look absolutely beautiful, from her head, to your belly and those cute toes. I love everything about you.”
