Fair enough! You did say in another comment that it's not the end. And my comment wasn't meant as a criticism, just that I thought it was a curve ball, so to speak. I will be happy with more Brooke period.
Eddie Murphy
2018-05-18 16:43:59 +0000 UTC
Don't treat the latest page like it's the last word on the story.
Jay Naylor
2018-05-18 16:23:57 +0000 UTC
Same. I just started added the little pattern which is there when he's colored.
Jay Naylor
2018-05-18 16:23:41 +0000 UTC
The calm before the storm . . .
Robert Kassebaum
2018-05-18 16:11:28 +0000 UTC
Didn’t think that this might actually happen and it is really kinda cute ^^. The story is getting more and more interesting and because I know this is just the first chapter I am curious where this is leading but(t) if there is one thing I learned it is that you are very good in surprising us all! ;-)
2018-05-18 05:40:33 +0000 UTC
Well, damn. Here I thought she was going to explore her attraction to ladies.
Eddie Murphy
2018-05-18 05:04:02 +0000 UTC
See, this is what I love about your work, Jay. You establish a storyline that appears pedestrian with some surface kink, then introduce something deeply meaningful which doesn’t undermine the characters, but makes their intimacy that much more important. So good.
Matthew Sinn
2018-05-18 05:03:56 +0000 UTC
I'm at work so I can't really go back and check but is this guy the same one that was bonking the thic teacher or a different guy? Did I miss a page haha. I don't remember him having the little pattern under the eyes.
Joseph
2018-05-18 04:12:18 +0000 UTC
Wow..seeing a scene where they would both be in an ''ordinary'' intercourse scene would be so special and unique. That'd be quite a different setting for Brooke i believe
Borrow
2018-05-18 03:59:39 +0000 UTC
She's so cute.
Wolfcub
2018-05-18 02:12:00 +0000 UTC
You'll get it.
Jay Naylor
2018-05-18 01:56:31 +0000 UTC
I feel indescribable joys
James
2018-05-18 01:45:27 +0000 UTC
Jay, what you do with characters is brilliant. I love this shit, can't wait to see how this "chapter" wraps up.
Lee Maplewood
2018-05-18 01:40:28 +0000 UTC
i need more brooke butt D:!
Mr.No FunZone
2018-05-18 01:27:36 +0000 UTC
Last two panels are adorable, nice work as always Jay
madhatter
2018-05-18 00:13:34 +0000 UTC
She looks so cute in this one I love it
UmberFox
2018-05-18 00:05:59 +0000 UTC
Sparks fly
Robert
2018-05-17 23:44:47 +0000 UTC
It's not. :3
Jay Naylor
2018-05-17 23:36:37 +0000 UTC
If this is a finale, BRAVO! The warm fuzzy feeling is a welcome end.
Twin_Stiletto
2018-05-17 23:36:30 +0000 UTC
I'm kinda happy for her :)
pokediginut
2018-05-17 23:16:31 +0000 UTC
So that's what character development looks like...
MKX Player
2018-05-17 23:06:52 +0000 UTC
Fine but, he owes her a night of, getting to eat out that teacher's ass he was fucking that aPPARently, we're all just going to let WALK away...