Poll Winner - The Deal(Line Art)
Added 2023-02-19 16:52:09 +0000 UTCI'm now working on the last poll winner: "A young man wants his girlfriend to dress more femininely, but she hates it. They make a deal: whatever he's willing to wear, she will too. They end up as a pair of elegant business women".
Comments
Wow, such indepth perspective. So impressive, and the art matches
Molly
2023-02-26 14:07:34 +0000 UTCFair enough. Yeah, re-reading it, she does push him harder than is warranted. Not okay in real life, but it's still a fun scenario. I'm more into soft stories, but this stuff is fun too :) Looking forward to the finished version ❤️
Edranair
2023-02-20 13:51:47 +0000 UTCActually, I'm exploring a forced-fem scenario here. The reason why the husband gives so much power to his passive-aggressive/ manipulative wife is that he's already weak and emasculated in the first place. Deep down he knows what he is doing is wrong and he will never be truly happy in this position, but he has been fed too much gynocentric propaganda to act on his own. Of course, feel free to interpret the work however you like. The reason I write so "openly" is that it gives people the freedom to make their own interpretations of my stories.
Pink Horizons
2023-02-20 13:42:47 +0000 UTC😳 Looks seriously hot. I love how she takes control of the situation without being a bully about it; he says something mildly sexist, she calls him on it and points out what it means, he starts telling her she's making it up, she calls him on trying to make her doubt herself and he apologises and proposes the matching outfits, but to make it up to her, she also asks him to give her control of the company, which he does; she doesn't bully him and she still calls him her husband afterwards, meaning they're still together and she's just taking a more dominant role in the relationship now, which he looks fine with ❤️ One minor suggestion I'd like to make is adding a little blush and more of a smile to the husband in the last panel to show he really is happy with the situation, but no pressure if you'd rather run it differently (playing more to his embarassment for instance); it's gorgeous, sexy and fun either way ❤️❤️❤️
Edranair
2023-02-19 17:08:36 +0000 UTC
