Pumpkin Comic WIP
Added 2019-10-24 16:04:37 +0000 UTCOkay, this has got to be a record for me, I don't think I've thrown something together this quickly before!
Story wise... who knows! Is the pumpkin is cursed? Maybe it's actually the spirit of the pumpkin she's carving? Or is it an alien parasite disguised as a pumpkin? Or (as a patron suggested) perhaps it's inhabited by the spirit of a witch or demon or something?
Regardless, it seems our young woman here has ended up on the receiving end of it, and now she's not quite herself anymore ;)
If there's time, I'll throw some dialogue and sound effects on it, but basically I think it's ready to go. How does it read? Does it flow well? Anything missing or confusing?
Comments
that is one idea for a sequel, if there is one. We'll see
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-26 07:15:56 +0000 UTCPumpkin root futa
Mauser8mm
2019-10-26 06:49:21 +0000 UTClove it can;t wight see your next work men and love the batgirl one too.
2019-10-25 22:56:17 +0000 UTCoh yeah～
2019-10-25 04:51:12 +0000 UTCBased on the bulges, I'd say it was pretty committed to the pumpkin shape and took that along with it
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-25 03:03:49 +0000 UTCAs gross and gorey as that scene was, I still really like!
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-25 03:02:38 +0000 UTCX-ray of the skirt part to explain the “alien” slipping out of disguise into the woman’s body.
The Hippy Hebrew Homestead
2019-10-25 01:22:51 +0000 UTCREminds me of the possession sequence from Evil Aliens, where a woman's 'baby' moves up her body into her head and it turns out it was an alien head all along.
David Rodoy
2019-10-25 00:08:56 +0000 UTCSomething good or something bad? Or just something?
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-24 22:48:28 +0000 UTCThanks!
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-24 22:48:08 +0000 UTCGood idea! Would also round out the last page to 3 panels. I'll see what I can whip up!
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-24 22:46:09 +0000 UTCI planned it as a video, but barely had time for the comic. Definitely will consider animating it at some point
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-24 22:44:27 +0000 UTCGlad to have pleasantly surprised you! Lmk if you figure it out, cuz I'm in the same boat :)
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-24 22:42:42 +0000 UTCMaybe in part 2? What if she grew a pumpkin "root" out of her body?
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-24 22:41:20 +0000 UTCWasn't planning on any TF this time, since I'm trying to round out the different kinds of outcomes. But she may still function as hive w that other pumpkin in hand.
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-24 22:40:20 +0000 UTCThey landed in October and mistook pumpkins for the dominant species. They quickly realized their mistake and are looking to correct it
Ovidius Naso
2019-10-24 22:38:36 +0000 UTCReally nice work :3
C4Shorty
2019-10-24 20:35:45 +0000 UTCWow! Amazing work on this possession sequence! I think adding one panel at the start of the final page, where she surveys her body in some way (i.e. looking at hands or down at her body) would better convey the possession aftermath. Anyway, great job!
Chilla
2019-10-24 19:50:17 +0000 UTCthis could be a good one to make into a full animation for next year maybe. love to imagine the stretching sounds as it gets up in her and the crunch when it goes into her head oh yeah and tits getting bigger after possession someone said - love that idea!
Kurada
2019-10-24 18:25:29 +0000 UTCThat was not what i expected, But i love it! Not sure what it is about that, But i just love it!
Spookems
2019-10-24 17:38:46 +0000 UTChope there will be a futa version as well
Yeania Aeon
2019-10-24 16:59:19 +0000 UTCWell that's something.
hinatasaix
2019-10-24 16:39:44 +0000 UTCHeh, cute, but maybe add two more pumpkins to her chest after the fact so she can be a self contained hive :P
Seithon
2019-10-24 16:18:39 +0000 UTCI love the "Alien disguised as a pumpkin" idea ;)
SAS_B-RoK
2019-10-24 16:06:54 +0000 UTC
