Chapter 63: Combat Training
Added 2025-01-01 01:51:40 +0000 UTCComments
I just caught up, and damn it is good. Firstly, I want to say that I genuinely enjoy the story and can't wait to see where it goes. Secondly, I appreciate how you show what Azure and the MC are both good at. Neither is all knowing nor arrogant, and they listen to each other to come up with increasingly beneficial solutions. Azure is a precision machine, and our main character is a big picture guy. It makes sense for micro adjustments in combat to be made by the highly calculating and logical side. The macro adjustments or flashes of inspiration coming from the main character are excellent. He's still new to cultivation, and as time has progressed we've seen more input. Plus the pet vine is A+
Dizzy
2025-01-01 16:02:31 +0000 UTC-Good work showing different scenarios from the elder, show that he’s experienced. Though no mention of single opponent with many runes? Duel scenario. -I see 3-4 times he came up with new strategies, 2 of them relied on Azure as sources, and another rely on him as analyst and timer saying “Now”. Might I suggest reducing this in the near future? -Tied to the last point, his thought patterns and habit often got “regulated” such as reminding or warning from Azure, reduced his “independence” and agency and competent shown. Not to say he shouldn’t use Azure, but I feel it is excessive right now, not showing competent enough from MC himself but show competent for Azure instead
Touch
2025-01-01 13:03:30 +0000 UTCHappy new year ❤️❤️🔥❄️
Maitreya Buddha
2025-01-01 10:17:41 +0000 UTCHe's really putting him through the ringer
Brandon Lydick
2025-01-01 03:44:18 +0000 UTCI did think about that after I finished writing the chapter. I'll try edit it tomorrow and make a mention of a formation. It is a training ground so it'd make sense for there to be such a formation. Thank you!
Kynan
2025-01-01 03:22:17 +0000 UTCtftc, tho how is he keeping up his rune activation for hours with this constant training. Maybe a mention about having a formation that increases the red energy regeneration or smt, as we've seen in his last fight it barely lasted a few minutes(even tho he now has the elemental rune and better efficiency i doubt he would have this much stamina, or at least mentioning something about that at the start being like-the energy used for each rune is so little i could keep this up for hours-or smt like that)
Amazon Shopper
2025-01-01 03:20:34 +0000 UTCTftc!
Itsigu
2025-01-01 02:02:20 +0000 UTC
