Chapter 286: The Fall
Added 2025-04-11 20:00:10 +0000 UTCComments
This felt very forced, like a truck coming out of nowhere to slam into the side of you. Instantly took away the MC's agency to do anything.
TwistedToaster
2025-04-13 00:55:12 +0000 UTCWasn’t elder Thorn the one Kal convinced he was a looper in his early loops? The one who tried and failed to change his cerulean vein to what Karl’s became? It’s entirely possible he’s thinking of the events of what past loops he can remember. Another pseudo/partial looper maybe? One who, like Kal, suddenly woke up one day knowing something was different and his cerulean vein had been changed? But not remembering any of the previous loops?
Rina
2025-04-12 07:32:11 +0000 UTCI thought you previously established that saints live to transfer sainthood. How/when was Thorne interrogating and killing them before they could harm the ancient trees? And enough times to be “over” listening to them talk especially after MCs interest in red/blue plant hybrids Also if Thorne is looping too they should know souls respawn in time loops. Biggest thing is there seem to be too many leaps in logic. readers can only sustain small leaps or we get confused/frustrated at the seeming incongruity.
jdog
2025-04-12 00:27:56 +0000 UTCI'm pretty sure in mentioning that the attacker understanding the concept of binding completely that he was meant to be unable to do anything outside of his body. I did think about flashing his eyes red and blue, or using the golden sun too, but then realised it's not like he was just bound there and letting it happen lol
tonright
2025-04-11 23:27:33 +0000 UTCMaybe it binds energy manifestetion too, maybe monday you will find out that is exactly what he did who knows at this point
Big Lumpy Beetle
2025-04-11 22:29:53 +0000 UTCIt is even worse. If it was just in the book, it wouldn't be a problem. And for a Webnovel it is not bad either. But to do it at the end of the book? That is goong to either make people ragequit the series or trie to get the next part ASAP
Tsorov
2025-04-11 22:17:41 +0000 UTCHoly cow, first, thanks for the chapter. I've enjoyed the novel thus far. Second... really? Other comments already touch on some of the issues I'd bring up here, so I'll only emphasize the biggest one. This is a cliffhanger for a chapter/arc within a book. This is the worst time to use such a plot device. I would rather stop reading at this point instead of being excited or interested in getting to the next page. If I were to read a physical book that ended in such a fashion I would never buy another thing the author published. Never the less, you're the author, so please craft the story as you deem fit. But... Holy cow.
EclecticReader
2025-04-11 21:54:18 +0000 UTCI should wait until i see where you go with this but i do feel like you should write a line where he tries to signal with Red energy or even spiritual energy since that's a way he can distinguish himself from other saints. It's fine if it doesn't work but i do feel he should have tried.
Infinity
2025-04-11 21:14:43 +0000 UTCGOD DAME IT WELP HE KNOWS WHAT TO DO NEXT TIME
Phoenixdrop
2025-04-11 21:14:29 +0000 UTCSo Thorn is a mad as all the others. I'm a bit confused on a point. To completely bind him, shouldn't thorn be able to see everything? To harness a bind, I'd think you'd need to know what you are binding. Though maybe the blue sun is the true controller of the calligraphy
Bakerbob
2025-04-11 21:09:47 +0000 UTCI am very much enjoying your story though. Thank you for writing it and the hours you put into it.
David
2025-04-11 21:07:35 +0000 UTCIf this was a published book I had bought, I would be very unhappy that I needed to buy another book to finish the current arc. I don't think I've ever read a physical book that's ended so abruptly, with such a big unknown.
David
2025-04-11 21:06:50 +0000 UTCEnding would be better with an epilog from maybe Kal's point of view otherwise it feels too abrupt
Aureus
2025-04-11 21:01:01 +0000 UTCI am also not a fan of the ending, but we should let the author show us what will happen next. For the most part, this story is well written and enjoyable. Maybe when the MC return to this world, he can actually work with the elders to save this world.
SC
2025-04-11 20:52:12 +0000 UTCWhy didn't he channel stellar energy? That probably would have loosened the bind and made his eyes gold making thorn listen to him
Crimson wolf
2025-04-11 20:22:10 +0000 UTC"new Genesis fruit". Not "new Genesis seed". Like the fruit that took him to a dying world.
Alexander Belousov
2025-04-11 20:22:08 +0000 UTCLook. I enjoy your writing. As an author you decide how to write. The way you wrote this, this was fundamentally flawed. The whole idea of "soul destruction", all of a sudden ... feels forced. Very forced. Within universe, it makes no sense. People go from "soul attacks are extremely rare" to all of a sudden "I am going to soul attack you on a whim". Feels very forced. Very unsatisfactory. If you are trying to take things in some new direction, like new world, or whatever, you can do it auto-magically through the Genesis Seed. "Look, because I absorbed a Saint energy, I got a new Genesis Seed, it matured immediately, but it is dying, and I need to go to a new world immediately". You can already do that. You do not need to do the kludge of "soul attack", or whatever. Just an opinion.
Alexander Belousov
2025-04-11 20:21:12 +0000 UTCHe couldn't speak but do you think he could make his eyes glow? Red then blue? Give himself time to escape while the Elder questions him?
ReadingObsessed
2025-04-11 20:21:06 +0000 UTCFUCK! What a brutal cliffhanger!
Wanderer of Worlds
2025-04-11 20:08:11 +0000 UTCBruh moment
Sin of Sloth
2025-04-11 20:07:22 +0000 UTC:O monday! aaaaa but congrats on finishing book 3
tonright
2025-04-11 20:00:42 +0000 UTC
