Taking a brief break from the Ice Queen project (but not from animating)
Added 2025-11-10 03:40:22 +0000 UTCI feel a bit burnt out from the project and some parts aren't quite as good as I hoped they'd be. But that's to be expected since this is all a learning experience more than anything. In the end, I'll make sure everything top-notch.
I'm also a bit concerned about finding a proper voice actress/actor because I'd hate to spend all this time working on this animation only to listen to these robotic voices and have people accuse the animation itself of being AI-generated because of that.
In the meantime, I want to practice some things and you guys can give me feedback on if it works or not. Trust me when I say: I'm a person who appreciates criticism. Because criticism allows my work to improve. Especially since the stuff I make is for you guys, and who knows better about what the audience wants than the audience.
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As for the sound, i'm not sure on how expensive hiring a VA is. But I think the AI Generated voices are...... "servicable" for right now, but thats only because you have very little dialogue in the scenes. The Supergirl animation talking about keeping you caged was good, and the AI sounded very disinterested, stiff and bored, but that fit the theme of the animation. Of course if you add more dialogue, then itll become more obvious the limitations of AI and theyll sound stilted and awkward. Maybe consider buying one of the available pre-recorded sound packs that certain VA's sell, and add more ambient or background sound effects. I.E. moaning, grunting, plapping, hips slapping, impact sounds, grunts from the males, wet squelching, etc etc. Just make the sound scape sound more "alive" This would probably work to conceal the AI voices better, if you don't want to invest a lot of $$ in getting a VA
Red Velvet
2025-11-10 16:09:40 +0000 UTCNice to see you have an open mind on "criticism", some artists get really big egos and hate any comments that aren't praising them, including a certain blender artist who does very similar femdom & pegging animations as you.... I always try and make my feedback "Constructive" Criticism, so its just giving helpful tips that the can help the artist improve, so it's nice to see you think the same way. In the past I left some suggestions on how to improve your work, and I think the big one that stands out is maps/settings. Yours tend to look very bland and lifeless, unrendered, like their in an empty void. The art style of the maps never really fits either, they look like their in an entirely different engine, like a flat unrendered untextured void. It might benefit you to use some more gameripped maps from open3dlabs, and add some clutter & props to the background. Like for example, Jill's Apartment from RE3 map ported by Ubermachine. It's got lots of clutter and background detail that makes it feel very "alive"
Red Velvet
2025-11-10 16:06:13 +0000 UTC
