The Queen - Part 11
Added 2017-08-14 00:01:00 +0000 UTC
Comments
More is better
TJ Westfall
2023-11-03 16:10:28 +0000 UTCThe art work is awesome and more sex scenes would be great
TJ Westfall
2023-10-19 13:49:41 +0000 UTCI take that as a note!
abimboleb
2017-08-29 18:51:28 +0000 UTCI feel you embellish somewhat with the length of an expected transformation. 4-5 pages does seem excessive for each body part which is why I enjoy abimboleb's style because the changes just general rush into the new gorgeous form. I feel the transformation is just as important as the payoff. Balance in all things.
Dude McDudeson
2017-08-16 18:08:53 +0000 UTCGreat great work here. I would appreciate more sex scene too but I really love transformation, especially slow mind corruption.
Alice_28XO
2017-08-16 11:38:31 +0000 UTCthen let me add more of my opinion to contrast those above...i prefer sex scenes...dislike drawn out 20 page transformations with minor changes on each page and finally once transformation is complete no "using" of the final product except for maybe 1 page...its like building a ferrari then leaving it in a warehouse not to be driven...in the end erotic content should be "erotic" something nsfw otherwise will be too PG and boring...so far i really like the pace of your transformations...even the VR set was a nice "shock" from 1 panel to the next...I liked that set alot...some artists show too many details in the transformations and slow changes happening to the point it starts to get boring and just ruins it..like 4-5 pages showing lips change...4-5 showing waist change...4-5 pages showing chest change...4-5 pages showing hair change...you get the point...too much unnecessary detail and then at the end nothing sexual :S I like the pace of your short stories so far...esp the newer ones (Shop/Queen/VR/PBHouse/Internship/and others) and hope you stick to that balance of transformation + sex.
scopes777
2017-08-16 04:13:29 +0000 UTCYour opinion counts
abimboleb
2017-08-15 21:09:40 +0000 UTCThank you for the Honest review! It helps a lot! :)
abimboleb
2017-08-15 21:09:26 +0000 UTCyes want more! yes want sex scenes! my favorite set so far!
scopes777
2017-08-14 11:49:48 +0000 UTCNice one again! And what the guy aboves me says, transformation rather than sex scenes :P
Master-TF
2017-08-14 11:29:39 +0000 UTCAmazing series so far. I prefer seeing the transformation more than the sex scenes. Regardless, great work.
Dude McDudeson
2017-08-14 07:05:32 +0000 UTC
