Closer: Page 04 (sketch)
Added 2018-03-02 12:38:42 +0000 UTCHi patrons, here's an update on the next page of the comic! This underwent slight deviations from the script, but to me it reads and flows a lot better. I'll be doing another two page at once workflow, so expect the next sketch page in a few days before I get this colored up.
Comments
Panel 4 is just too cute with that expression.
KipFox
2018-03-06 01:35:09 +0000 UTCFar less hesitation, and the wording felt less organic. That said, it's normal for me to do on-the-fly adjustments to dialog while working on comic pages.
Zaush
2018-03-03 08:41:42 +0000 UTCWhat cute expressions! Love how you do it! Good work
Harris_the_Foxx
2018-03-03 06:13:28 +0000 UTCIt is a nice one ain’t it
Warwolf416
2018-03-02 19:52:22 +0000 UTCI’m liking the yeen. And Jayden in the four panel, too cute
Warwolf416
2018-03-02 16:53:12 +0000 UTCDamn he big!
Warwolf416
2018-03-02 15:43:52 +0000 UTCThis is looking fantastic. I really look forward to seeing more of this! I hope I get to catch a stream of you working on this. :3
ArtMutt
2018-03-02 13:31:03 +0000 UTCThat's a cute fox!
WSAD
2018-03-02 12:49:11 +0000 UTCSo thick ❤️
Ar29
2018-03-02 12:43:19 +0000 UTC
