Closer: Page 06 (sketch)
Added 2018-05-05 15:38:43 +0000 UTCHere's the sketch for page 6, and might I say this is probably the most annoying page yet! I went through 4 layout revisions, all with very boring profile angles and insertion closeups, and it just sucked. I think this came out well realized, comparatively.
It was mentioned that the lower left panel might need some pose revision to make it feel more dynamic and less stiff, so that frame could change between now and the final.
Today my friends are all throwing a goodbye get together on account of me moving out of state, so I'll have to come back to this on Sunday. I should be able to get a few hours of sleep before the festivities are set to start.
As always, comments on this are welcome!
Enjoy!
Comments
I live this heyna guy !
2018-05-31 08:04:03 +0000 UTCAlso aw man you're leaving Cali? maan I never got to hang out haha. Have fun and good luck!
Asher Tail
2018-05-06 05:35:21 +0000 UTCHuff! <3
Asher Tail
2018-05-06 05:34:47 +0000 UTCLove it! Have fun at your party!
Harris_the_Foxx
2018-05-06 05:28:27 +0000 UTCThe dopey tongue out thing Roger is doing in the bottom left is hot as hell.
Damie♥
2018-05-05 22:57:38 +0000 UTCThis version is already amazing :p Love the dialogue and positioning
CH1LL
2018-05-05 21:21:30 +0000 UTCWell well wellllllll then
2018-05-05 19:42:30 +0000 UTCNice page
Warwolf416
2018-05-05 18:07:56 +0000 UTCSafe trip man
draegwolf
2018-05-05 17:34:53 +0000 UTCI think the left bottom panel is great! I think the “stiff” look actually fits. If i would change anything I would say the upper right panel could be tweeked so that he is talking down at veiwer and we are not looking slightly down on him. It really isnt that big a deal and my idea may not even work. But this whole panel screams he is a dom, i feel always having the view below or at his level in this panel would really emphasize that. Either way looks great as always!
2018-05-05 17:31:21 +0000 UTCI like Zaush art work so much!!!
Junior
2018-05-05 15:46:54 +0000 UTCWhew, that central panel is haauuwwwit...! :)
Sterling Rodd
2018-05-05 15:44:52 +0000 UTC
