PATRIARCH FOWL

Hey Kid, Want to Read More Chapters? 😏

Added 2023-05-28 14:06:38 +0000 UTC

I am looking for more Beta Readers!

I want to speed up the editing process but I need more Goblins scouring through the chapters and help me tinker with them!

The current beta reader backlog reaches Chapter 148!

I've previously made a longer post on what being a Beta Reader means.

(DO READ IT IF YOU ARE INTERESTED)

How to Apply

Send me a private message and tell me simply how much free time for leaving feedback you have and add your feedback on the latest published chapter based on the guidelines below.

Below are the guidelines I share with current Goblins at the end of every chapter.

First and foremost, feel free to express your genuine emotions. BOREDOM IS VALID, as is happiness. Share your feelings at the end of each chapter, and feel free to elaborate on the reasons.

Rest assured, I have thick skin, and I prefer your honest, critical feedback over polite but unhelpful remarks.

In addition to your emotions, please consider these five questions for each chapter. You're not obliged to answer all of them each time, but use them to help you reflect on the chapter.

Was there anything confusing or hard to believe?
Were you curious about any aspects of the chapter and looking forward to learning more?
Did any parts of the chapter feel slow or drag?
If you were a picky reader, what might have irritated you while reading?
After reading the chapter, what would you change about the story or writing, whether at the chapter or story level?