Coach's Next Victim - Short Animation

I wish it was longer!!!

Mitch

I can’t stop cumming to this. The coach is so hot. Love his big pecs.

Tyler

This is amazing! So hot 🔥

Tyler

Anytime ^-^ Also my feedback was supposed to be a two parter but I ran out of time. So here's part 2 : This is much more demanding so take this as some sort of notes for the future. Also it may come down to personal preferences at the end of the day so take it with a grain of salt ;p So yeah, after coach gets very close to the ceiling, we cut to much much later when his cock is big enough to fill a door frame. Question is, what happened in between ? Sure imagination is a powerful tool and it works great in comic book form because in this case your audience is used to fill in the gaps between the boxes, but this is video ... you got to show more ! (and I am conscious of how much work this is so in the future maybe work in multiple parts like you do with your comic books ;) Anyway : Huge mist opportunity here to show us coach's head actually hit the ceiling. That would be so hot to see his giant growing body forced to contort itself as he fills the room with his growing frame. Maybe we get to see the other guy barely escaping that bulging mass of muscle, then starting to worship that growing cock, continuing to feed coach's growth. The giant slowly Squeezing tighter and tighter in this room until Boom ! His cock finally breaks free through that door with the little dude in the process of fucking it. I don't doubt you would find ways to frame these action in a very tasteful manner like you did here. Your cinematography is really great and emphasizes on the right elements without unnecessary elements (I saw a comment recommending you to show actions through different angles and focus on different elements, to that I say yes but be very careful ! Only do it when it's appropriate and try to not repeat the same animation bit over and over again) So yeah, again, this animation is of very VERY HIGH quality, but I believe you going that extra mile would make it one of the greatest ! I wish you much success and very exited by your work and what's to come ^-^

MuscleGrowFreak

Hello! Thank you for your feedback! I honestly felt at the time that if I put those growth sounds at the beginning they would end up drowning out the sounds of the coach and the player having sex, but I can definitely see that it gives of the idea that coach only begins to grow at the end which wasn't intended. I will edit the audio and see what I can do to fix it, thank you for the advice!

MaxMuscle3D

Hi, first of all, great video ! Very hot. Great render and animation quality. Since you are looking for some feedback : here's what I came up with : First to better what's already there, you could start the growth sounds earlier. Coach clearly starts growing big before the stretching sounds begin. They should be more in sync imo. Plus this would help you define the way coach is getting bigger. Does it sound liquidy, is he like a balloon getting filled up? is it more of a meaty sound ? The Stretching of his skin ? Maybe a combination of all that ? Also since the stretching sounds star super late, it's like the real growth's just starting but then you cut away from it just when it starts getting good. Which is unfulfilling for your audience. Anyway, just a reminder to not underestimate the power of sound ;)

MuscleGrowFreak

🔥

Blkkryptonian

Amazing 🤤

This is truly Amazing work! If possible can you make a longer version using the same material? Slower and more angels as he trusts and grows? Now you have to slow down the video to truly have time to appreciate the the hot fucking. I think we all would very much appreciate that. Thank you and keep up the good work!

Kronox

more like this please ♥♥ this is the hottest/best animation so far

Rex091

THAT WAS HOT ASF ❤️

Tinybobcat

There was a lot more meat on that football player than I thought. I imagine that team has a lot of trouble winning sense the couch is taking their gains.... Though I do like the idea of a scrawny couch follows his big beefy team into the locker room, and then moments later a BIG BEEFY couch leads his scrawny team out of the locker room. XD

Darkluster4

That's a muscle god in the making. You could do so much more. I'd love to watch characters really get into their growth and orgasm over that development and size. To hear them beast out, look, and sound monstrous. See them become a force of strength and masculine energy that will make guys horned up watching them just grow

JV