Various Everythings, Chapter 1 pg 155
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aaaaa ;;___;;; thank u becca im so glad i was able to convey it decently enough!! i was worried it was gonna be all scrambled in some way so im glad i did enough OTL
Siggy
2019-05-01 20:25:31 +0000 UTCRealtalk tho, you did a really good job of setting up Fain being enough of a jerk that this is such a good pay off of David going off on him. It's like a notch above magic-smacking him in the face. But also the way you used this to contextualize the "present" situation of Fain wanting to talk to David years down the line is p well done. You're a good storyteller, Siggy. <3
2019-05-01 13:41:02 +0000 UTC-clap clap-
2019-05-01 13:38:37 +0000 UTCdamn, that was vicious.... I love it, as someone who has been pressured into being the bigger person for a majority of my life, this is.... cathartic
Thunderking8
2019-04-30 17:48:33 +0000 UTCHonestly, after everything, he deserves to be mean here, to be “petty.” Society always says that you should be the bigger person, to not stoop to their level, but a large part of society also tells us that people like David are sick and wrong, so fuck Society, and you be you David! Tear this asshole apart, maybe he will learn something.
Lord Crusade
2019-04-30 01:38:42 +0000 UTC
