Post Interview Page 8
Added 2024-03-25 13:00:12 +0000 UTCTurning cautiously, Gina peers into the alley to discover a fellow victim of the gnomes harvesting while said harvesting is still in progress. At first she considers ways in which she might intervene, but then another notion occurs to her.
There are some challenges to this "one panel is one page" style of comic that I didn't anticipate when I began. Mostly the problem is dialogue: how much dialogue do I need to put in one page to advance the scenario, versus how much dialogue will seem unnatural to get through in one panel, which usually represents five seconds to about a minute of actual time?
Too little dialogue and the page doesn't have enough substance, too much and it seems unnatural and overly talky. On this page, I decided that Gina discovering the Awesome Business Woman being stripped at the end of the alley obviously deserved its own page, but maybe Gina stroking her chin and deciding what to do next did not. As you can see, I decided to put the chin stroking in an insert panel, and hopefully make the story not bog down too much.
Artist's note: When I first drew it, it was just a head and shoulders shot of Gina with her hand near her face. Then I realized the opportunity I was leaving on the table, and redrew it so that her boobs were hanging out of the panel.
Some creative decisions are easier than others.
Comments
The stripping process is what I enjoy the most π so yes this page was really nice, and I really enjoy some thin ladies with petite chest π they are the best!
bio
2024-03-27 07:10:32 +0000 UTCOh I see π Well now that she has no more "uniform" she can be anyone π
bio
2024-03-27 07:08:37 +0000 UTCYes, I wanted to make sure the story wasn't all just full frontal nudity. The stripping process can be fun as well π
Legmuscle
2024-03-26 16:25:10 +0000 UTCThe gnomes are everywhere, and always where you least expect them π₯Έ
Legmuscle
2024-03-26 16:23:56 +0000 UTCFBI wouldn't have been a bad idea, but no she's not with the gubberment
Legmuscle
2024-03-26 16:22:40 +0000 UTCGina's a little pressed right now, you may want to adjust your expectations π
Legmuscle
2024-03-26 16:21:45 +0000 UTCI may reveal that if I ever think of a good way to do it. (Gnome queen is a good idea π‘)
Legmuscle
2024-03-26 16:21:04 +0000 UTCAnd to think I almost didn't do it, what was I thinking π€ͺ
Legmuscle
2024-03-26 16:19:40 +0000 UTCThanks! I wanted to make Gina's poses a little cuter than what I normally do π I've thought of remaking some of my old stuff, but I feel like that would come at the expense of doing new stuff, so I'm torn. Maybe when I get a little faster
Legmuscle
2024-03-26 16:19:01 +0000 UTCI've gotta say... I love the pose and expression on Gina standing there. π Out of curiosity, do you have any plans to recreate The Interview with your current level of skill?
Lewwing
2024-03-26 14:51:19 +0000 UTCThe boobs outside the panel: genius
Roy Selznick
2024-03-25 16:52:39 +0000 UTCAre we ever going to learn why the Gnomes are stealing clothes? Is there a Gnome Queen that just wants more fabric for her new Clothing Designs?
The Incredible Bray
2024-03-25 16:30:33 +0000 UTCI hope Gina saves her.
Annony Moose
2024-03-25 13:46:51 +0000 UTCWait, is it Γ FBI agent? π€ looks like it with the... I mean half of the Black suit and sunglasses π
bio
2024-03-25 13:44:25 +0000 UTCnice to see that the gnomes are not confined to ECyberElectroDynamics. the ladies of Awesome City will be surprised
memfic
2024-03-25 13:39:35 +0000 UTCI like this one. I don't know why but always liked the when you show the women in their underwear stockings and garters. As they are being stripped. Gives the story alot more detail and realism. Given the fact that leave the gnomes more to take off LOL.
David Ray jr
2024-03-25 13:30:42 +0000 UTC
