Fiction Special - Guardians II
Added 2020-04-12 01:22:38 +0000 UTCAnother snippet from my Ceteriverse.
Comments
I'll make sure I don't screw up like that again. Thanks for reading! I haven't gotten much feedback for these little fiction snippets I've been doing, but I'mma keep doing them
Christopher R. Rice
2020-04-12 20:49:26 +0000 UTCIt yeah it threw my right outa the story while I went looking for who "I" is
Brice Moss
2020-04-12 20:46:46 +0000 UTCDamn it. I did. Grrr. But that's why I'm doing these. Honing my craft a bit.
Christopher R. Rice
2020-04-12 20:35:29 +0000 UTCGood sense of background but I think you shifted into first person a paragraph or two in.
Brice Moss
2020-04-12 20:14:59 +0000 UTC
