Yea that's kinda what i was going for. I think it works well on the lower half but in the upper half, i'm not sure you naturally read the "that was a much better video" panel last, as intended. But i'll see, maybe it's fine
DeprivedArt
2023-09-26 06:00:23 +0000 UTC
I like the composition, it's a little chaotic but that reflects the panic Robin must be feeling. It still reads well.