Transforming A Story

I love writing stories, like Sex In The Cards, Wishr, The Bust, and more. It is super fun to put my ideas to page. But at the same time I know I have certain tropes and habits I fall into. To tackle this I love editing and reshaping other stories. I have been really enjoying my work on the public domain Baum books, and sometimes I also commission people to write stories for me based on ideas I have had (I always preserve and share what was written for me because I feel you should always know what of my writing you are getting). I then edit those and shape them into the tales I want them to be. Recently I got back a short story ghostwritten for me based on the following pitch; Nadia is a tour guide at a museum, mousey and shy and on a romantic dry spell. One especially tiresome day, while fetching something for her boss, Nadia stops and says, “I wish my feet would no longer hurt!” Unbeknownst to Nadia she was standing by a newly acquired statue of Aphrodite – which is in fact the real Aphrodite turned to stone. Nadia soon discovers that Aphrodite has granted her wish – every time Nadia walks anything she feels that used to be aches or pains is now instead very pleasurable erotic sensation on her feet. Walking too much will eventually give Nadia an extremely pleasurable orgasm that wells up from her feet, but it also leaves her aching for actual sex. This is the same day that Claire is hired as a new tour guide. Claire is assigned to shadow Nadia and learn from her. During this tour Nadia's feet make her hornier and hornier which she tries to hide from Claire and the tour group before nearly collapsing in pleasure. Claire helps Nadia to an empty office, and she thinks Nadia's mutterings about her feet mean they are in pain, so Claire removes them and starts to massage Nadia's feet. This drives Nadia even wilder with sexual need, and she pulls Claire into a passionate kiss. Claire gives in to her attraction to Nadia and the pair make love. I have shared the text I received based on that idea at the included link. There are two copies; the text after the ### will remain unchanged, while the copy before it is what I will be working on in the mornings over the next few weeks. But this time I wanted to get all of you involved. Ignoring grammar or spelling - I will take care of that - I invite you to read ahead and leave comments at the moments you like, or want more detail, or have ideas about. I know roughly how I want to make Nadia more empowered and openly interested in women and how Aphrodite's blessing will impact all of that. But if you see a moment that you'd like to see embellished or worked in that makes sense for the general structure of the story share it with a comment in the Google doc and we will see what I can do with it! As I work on it you can find where I am by searching the text for my digital bookmark, ***. Let's have some sexy fun!