"You're riding this out with me."
Added 2023-08-19 16:00:08 +0000 UTCYesterday was a great writing day! Dialogue was flowing, their chemistry was electric. Roth gave me some awesome quotes! π₯΅π I had to do some research to fill in some plot things involving Rami and Ariana. π£π°π« Happy thatβs finally sorted!
βAre you listening to me?β Her sharp tone was ruined by a hiccup. βIβm breaking our agreement. Sue me. I donβt fucking care. Iβm done!
βI hear you,β he said as he sat on the couch and arranged her sideways on his lap.
βThen you have toββ
He captured her chin before he growled, βIβve told you before, youβre in too fucking deep. Youβre riding this out with me.β
**This is a raw draft of Bitter Confessions. Please do not share or distribute.
Something that jammed me up for a while was Roth was pressing so hard, that Jasmine reached this point. πThat was never supposed to happen. I never anticipated in the whole book that she would ever throw in the towel like this, but Roth pushed so fucking hard that she snapped and I didn't know where to go from there. Roth revealed stuff that shouldn't have come out until book 4, when they had more time and understanding under their belt. But, of course, he had to rush it and ruin all my carefully laid plans. I tossed out maybe three different aftermaths. This is part of the fourth. My favorite and the only one that fits at the moment. I don't know if it was me that was in a good mood or Roth, but it all flowed beautifully today and I made a ton of progress! Yahoo.
Iβm going to be working on a π scene. The OG patrons got a glimpse of that scene years ago and I suspect it needs a refresher. Have a great weekend everyone!! Iβm hoping I make it to the beach ποΈ at some point.
Comments
What does ring π scene mean?
Maddy
2023-08-25 22:09:36 +0000 UTCWhy am I picturing Jas drunk here with Roth caring for her and humoring her until she sobers up π₯Ή Mia, Iβm crying
Denny
2023-08-21 00:09:49 +0000 UTC
