Kinniku Kiss 1-6
Added 2018-06-20 18:50:21 +0000 UTCEverything looks like it's working as it should on page 6 the "The Kinniku Kiss". Tsunade's regaining her physical youth. Howevever...it looks like something unexpected is about to happen.
Comments
I can certainly understand not being too keen on the idea of drawing Naruto basically making out with an old lady, as well as not having a reference (and any desire to just get to the good part already). It just seemed weird to me that you established that this process would disrupt the illusion, had Naruto blindfold himself at her request, and then effectively skipped that part of the transformation. If even the close up shots had shown her looking, to use the blunt terms, saggy and deflated before firming up and filling out again, I don't think it would've struck me as odd. It's ultimately a very minor thing, though, and as I said before, I'm really enjoying this. Please continue.
M313
2018-06-23 00:55:26 +0000 UTCI was tempted to do a full on image of an older Tsunade, except...well, there were two factors that dissuaded me. One is that I have never found any good references for Tsunade in her real form. Heck, I feel lucky to have found the references that I have, which are far from comprehensive. We barely even see Tsunade in her aged self as it is. Just quick glimpses of her hand aging or her brow. Just enough to imply her true age. So I didn't have enough information to figure out how she would actually look. Also - and this might seem a bit cowardly on my part - but I was worried that throwing in that level of Fan Disservice might scare people off. And I do need the support of Patrons like you. As a result, I decided to try and imply both Tsunade's henge failing and her youth being restored.
OrionPax09
2018-06-22 03:50:05 +0000 UTCTo be honest, even in the show Tsunade's actual old appearence was never truly seen.
Mike Smith
2018-06-22 03:45:57 +0000 UTCI'm really enjoying this comic so far, which is impressive, since I never watched Naruto and have little or no idea who these characters are. The layout and the art are both well done. With this page, I think it would've been a lot more effective if you'd actually given us a look at Tsunade's old form first. I mean, I get what's happening here, that the illusion of youth and beauty is becoming reality. I'm also well aware that you're not done. But so far as what you actually see here, the character is transforming into a sexy young woman...from a sexy young woman. I think a "before" picture would've been beneficial.
M313
2018-06-22 01:35:03 +0000 UTCIt has begun! XD
Mike Smith
2018-06-20 22:40:20 +0000 UTC
