Kinniku Kiss 1-12 (NSFW)
Added 2018-07-17 03:31:36 +0000 UTCPage 12 of "Kinniku Kiss" sees the conclusion of Tsunade's transformation, as well as Naruto and Shizune's reactions. This takes care of the first chapter. Be on the lookout for the next chapter, which starts in August of 2018.
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It's cool, I always hated that trope too. It's overused, not funny, and just annoying. I can't wait to see what you'll do next though! :)
Mike Smith
2018-07-18 03:16:43 +0000 UTCI meant to say, "I can understand Tsunade being mad she was caught in the buff."
OrionPax09
2018-07-17 12:10:57 +0000 UTCLook, I can understand Tsunade being caught in the buff, but I really do hate the whole "beating men up for whatever reason as comedy" Trope. I'm not just gonna throw something like that into any of my works for a laugh, simply because it's never funny. Besides, I thought Naruto's and Shizune's reactions were much funnier. As for what happens next...I'll leave you all to guess which girl gets the Kinniku Kiss next!
OrionPax09
2018-07-17 12:10:09 +0000 UTCExcellent! And I was afraid actually that Naruto would get decked outta nowhere since he saw, "The Forbidden Sight" but I'm glad it didn't happen. I can't WAIT to see what happens next and I wish you the best dude! :)
Mike Smith
2018-07-17 06:45:20 +0000 UTC
