sorry this one took so long. i realize now that this is basically 2 comic strips in one, and there's backgrounds, and new characters who all require designs. i tried out a new coloring technique for coloring: i colored before cleaning up the lines. not sure if it saved me any time but i think it helped give the characters a bit more of a 3 dimensional appearance bc i started with the form and later worried about pretty linework. i might start doing things this way now
this is supposed to be the beginning of act 3. i wanted to maybe have another strip of TY getting bullied before he snaps, but i couldnt come up with any ideas that didnt come off as too "make up a guy to get mad at." now im thinking its better if he snaps for no reason, because its all in his head. this might be the lesson of the story or something. TY is a flawed character just like achilles