Encounter
Added 2020-04-16 15:33:59 +0000 UTCI wish to show the young birrin meeting these dolphin like creatures. Do you prefer seeing the entire body through a cross-section of the water, or just the spy-hopping head?
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We will see the birrin in their home and interacting with family in chapters before this one so that should establish a baseline size.
Alex
2020-04-16 16:11:16 +0000 UTCHaving the whole body makes sense if you also include some of the ecosystems that underwater there, if you want to include that part, if its more from the Birrin’s point of view and more story like, than showing the head feels a little better imo cause than its the little birrin interacting with coo animals, like how a kid on earth would look at dolphins if they ran into them in a river. If its in a section talking about the dolphins, being related to the mom and baby imagine, than the whole body makes sense, and the Birrin gives size comparison. Means you would need a propers size comparison for a birrin a little earlier, but you could do that artistically, makes it so you don’t need a ruler and you could make fun stuff with that potentially, more options. Just my thoughts, your work has been great either way.
ZCochraine!%
2020-04-16 15:41:31 +0000 UTC
