Requited Change Chapter 4.5
Added 2021-07-10 13:17:45 +0000 UTCHello foxes and above!
Chapter 5 is now underway of 'Requited Change', the full chapter shall be released in a week's time. I am now putting more panels into each page, so there are less pages but more images until the TFs happen, then they take up an entire page.
Testing has gone well for TLotK, just a few things to tweak in the gypsy camp and I'm currently working on the start of the dungeon. I reworked part of what I've done for more of a dramatic effect, so rather than you getting to Okabe unmolested there is now a larger scene tweaking the plot that I had already written!
So here we go for the comics:
'Requited Change' Chapter 4.5 (new chapter starts at 267 - 291):
https://mega.nz/file/ivwwHL4T#Pte7102jz_1DU2FKr-uBQjLhGs582mCKNYH7ks4KpIA
'Maid Different' Chapter 1 - 3:
https://mega.nz/file/SqJhGKpA#dtAzk-GvEbodd9MN_p0pyjU-WQ8RH8mJLfMFTFhUOsk
'The Youkai's Tail':
https://mega.nz/file/HqBHVCwR#AknaAMqLbAjYciarRlkVfQzQ_b9rSTHCGziyTOPZ2Uw
Speak to you Monday! Have a good weekend!
Comments
Yup, a little nod to a truly great RPG Maker game. ;) When I was developing it I dropped some hints towards it. I think I'll start numbering the panels if it is getting confusing for people, it's easy to forget this as in your own head you know the flow of the panels and assume readers will as well. I think from the next update I'll begin numbering them.
MassManic
2021-07-11 12:48:55 +0000 UTClooks good though i do agree with sparticus_37 on the layout. definitely excited for next weeks update :D teasing us stopping just as something amazing is about to happen :D. also as a side note i have noticed some youtubers picking up an old favourite horror game... HOW DID I NOT NOTICE ?! your haunted mansion section of TLotK. well played MassManic nice reference that i cant believe i didnt get straight away as it should of been obvious to anyone who played that other game. hahaha :D
shineypooface
2021-07-11 11:56:05 +0000 UTCI'll work on it, if worst comes to worst I'll number the panels or add a guide on the proper way to read them. The way I was going is as you described, reading left to down then right to down, but I know some pages don't conform fully to this.
MassManic
2021-07-10 21:27:32 +0000 UTCsome constructive feedback: your panel layouts are a bit confusing to me. It looks like your are going for a book layout where you read one half top to bottom then the other half top to bottom. As someone who is used to reading manga/webcomics online, it makes me re-read many of the pages because I can't tell if I read them in the intended order
sparticus_37
2021-07-10 20:09:44 +0000 UTCThanks!
MassManic
2021-07-10 16:28:32 +0000 UTClove this comic, the panels look good
Max
2021-07-10 16:26:12 +0000 UTC
