Image Series № 9
Added 2022-08-28 10:00:04 +0000 UTC
Comments
Well, there's hints the end goal is female supremacy which is interesting but if that's where the game goes it would be cool to see what happens after that and not end when the goal is completed.
Yeeeesb0x
2022-08-30 14:15:14 +0000 UTCI didn't mean to end the game immediately. But a good game - and, frankly speaking, "Moving Down" is pretty much on the way there - needs a beginning in order to introduce the story and the characters, a middle part for the escalation of the plot, and the end to show the impact on the future life of the characters. Emphasize one automatically neglects the others and the balance gets lost, which makes the entire game suffer. But that's just my point of view.
Nanus
2022-08-30 09:47:22 +0000 UTCThere's no hurry to end.. Too many games end when they start to really get going..
Yeeeesb0x
2022-08-29 19:14:58 +0000 UTCSure enough you can't please everyone and satisfy all wishes. Moreover you should also begin to take the end into consideration. Nobody wants to play a game with a size of more than 5 GB and no end in sight. Your game is awesome as it is, although I would have wished that the event of officially becoming Maria's slave would have been more celebrated (e.g. in a ceremony where you, before witnesses, swear eternal loyalty to your Mistress and seal it by voluntarily kissing her feet. Followed by a little celebration, etc.). Regarding the slave school, perhaps you can decide which course to attend and therefore get certain skills (oral skills, toilet skills, pain resistance, etc.), which may have an impact on your relationship with Maria. Would be nice to have. However, I'm eagerly looking forward to your next update and praise your game so far.
Nanus
2022-08-29 10:32:13 +0000 UTCHi, thanks for the review! I'll take your comments into consideration, and I'll try to incorporate them in the future! ;)
Miron
2022-08-28 13:43:08 +0000 UTChello, I really like your art and the game, but I wanted to give my opinion on some things that could have made the game better and others that ruined it. I was hoping to see something more real in the game. for example Jennifer verifying that the mc was submissive and taking advantage of the situation was something I liked but it was very fast, the first opportunity the mc made an oral, it would be more interesting if first there were some more subtle dominance scenes for example jennifer asking to tie the shoe, asking for help in a stretch where her feet were next to his face, or humiliating in any other more subtle way, this is for all the other characters, they were all very fast, megan for example had a very cool development , when she knocked over the cafe and he had to clean it and prepare her desk too, it's these details that make it more interesting, if it's too straight it gets unrealistic and boring. in my opinion the mc becoming an "official slave" was a big mistake, it made the game very boring, you could add cuckold scenes, or pee scenes but the mc should continue to have a seemingly normal relationship. i would find it very interesting for a maid like rita to think they were a normal couple and that with time she would realize that he is a submissive and use that to her advantage, when maria was not around, rita could order the mc to clean the house instead, or pay extra money and humiliate him hidden from maria, abusing more and more the mc's submission, something that can't be done anymore because the mc is a slave, this took away many possibilities in the game. I hope you understand my point of view, I would love to see your games with more development, more sexual tension, not something fast and boring. I understand that it must be a lot of work to make the game and that's why you end up trying to rush and get straight to the point. I had a few more things to say but the text is already too long, if you read everything I thank you for your attention and good luck with your project.
Mirage
2022-08-28 13:30:22 +0000 UTC
