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Update and Process

Added 2021-08-17 00:10:19 +0000 UTC

I've been frazzled from my second dose and other things, but I'm gonna try to proceed on the Dagashi Kashi comic based on this nemu...which I'm sure is completely useless and unreadable to you, but messing around with layouts and ideas at this stage will make it easier later. The first five pages are probably more locked in than the final three, but the Nagatoro comic had me make a change to layout while I was working on it, mainly to avoid repetitive composition. I already removed a duplicate butt shot to add some feet instead (with this in mind, page 3 is suspect).

There's also a fair bit of re-reading of the original manga to learn artist-specific panelling philosophy; in this case, Kotoyama often has three rows and obeys thirds, but they're not even thirds, so scales here will change in practise.

Anyway, glaring issues or suggestions are fine if you see them.