All That's Jass - broken storyline
Added 2023-05-02 17:52:46 +0000 UTCwhen I originally created "All That's Jass". I was a story about two women Jasmine and Loren. Volume one, was their first battle where Loren would ultimately defeat Jasmine. at the end of ther battle, Loren leaves a note in her pass out foe, saying if she desires a rematch to call this #. apond calling that number Jasmine learns it belongs to a private bar. She is invited to come over. As she enters, she see two women fistfighting with a much of upscale people watching. after that fight was over she meets the boss ( Mistress). She informs Jasmine in order to get her rematch she would have to join her group. and fight her way to the top, where her best fighter is at, Loren. During Jasmine journey to the top, she would developed new rivals, Jenna and Laura.. while Loren would have her own battles.
Sadly, the story never developed the way I wanted it too. The Jasmine char herself was causing errors. Plus I have improved my images alot. I cringe every time i see my older images lol. I want to erase the board and just start over. which explains the new Asian girl, Kimiko (the one I've been featuring alot) ... I kinda wanted to make her the new Jasmine. but it seems I just creating confusion. so basically I'm just doing random mini stories now. Feel free to tell me your input. I love to hear ideas. or even your dissatisfaction. I'm always trying to improve. and your input is very important to me
