The Calamitous Bob part 3 (chapters 25 - 34)
Added 2021-06-11 16:37:32 +0000 UTCHi first readers!
This is the third segment of Viv's disastrous adventures over Nyil, eighty pages that I had fun writing. Incidentally, this is the last piece I will be releasing for this tier as I think that this is a large enough sample. Rest assured that the segment does not end on a cliff as I am not that monstrous. I will probably start releasing the earlier chapters on RR later this month and follow the same model as for Journey,
That is all, enjoy!
Comments
Yeah, still a few typos. I'm working on it.
Mecanimus
2021-07-16 06:45:48 +0000 UTCOh, the first aid scene was fucking gold.
luda305
2021-07-16 02:13:13 +0000 UTCThe returned to Varska
luda305
2021-07-16 02:07:18 +0000 UTCShrieks had seized
luda305
2021-07-16 01:58:09 +0000 UTCGrew intensity
luda305
2021-07-16 01:55:36 +0000 UTCMidly confused
luda305
2021-07-16 01:52:55 +0000 UTCForrester grab
luda305
2021-07-16 01:51:25 +0000 UTCThe problem with the edited chapters being grouped up is that commenting is difficult. Typos: I was ancient. Bv arska
luda305
2021-07-16 01:45:18 +0000 UTCStill has quite a few it seems.
Mecanimus
2021-07-15 16:18:03 +0000 UTCI like the edited chapters! The typos for the individual chapters chased me off once 😂
Gavriel
2021-07-14 19:34:55 +0000 UTCHow dare you doubt me to begin with! >:0 Jokes aside enjoy the rest of the story... Hehehehe.
Mecanimus
2021-06-29 02:53:02 +0000 UTCWow... Been a dedicated reader of yours for a while, but I was reluctant to start Bob cause I was not sure how often it would be updated... more fool me! Oh ye of little faith! I should not have doubted you, Bob is just as good as Journey of Black and Red, and now I'm doubly ensnared by your writing, you charming devil
Adrian Gorgey
2021-06-29 01:45:01 +0000 UTC
