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Early Chapter 50: The Verdant Mountain Sect

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I like it. Granny has a lot riding on Rick.

Alexander Dupree

Definitely! I think that’s insightful, and I haven’t seen it done before in a book or a tournament setting like this. So to me it adds to the atmosphere and realism of what’s happening.

Aaron

Thanks! My thought was that no one at that level would go down easily, so in the scope of contained matches like this there'd be mostly stalemates. I hoped it would add an interesting dynamic to the tournament.

Sarah Lin

I like how the heavyweights are flashy, but ultimately kind of a stalemate. I think it is a really interesting dynamic.

Aaron

I did actually mean shin in this case. The arm blows distracted enough for Rick to get in a surprise hit with his leg. All weight classes can in theory earn the same number of points, it's just that the heavyweights rarely fight long enough for anyone to get a decisive victory. Receiving 8-12 points is on the rarer high end. But yes, the lower classes can be essential, which gives the tournament some more strategy.

Sarah Lin

> Rick traded several blows with him before he managed to kick his opponent's shin. chin, rather? Since you're describing him throwing punches, I'd expect a hit in the chin rather than in the shin. So, there's basically no points to be gained in heavyweights. Interesting. 4 points gained, and I suppose they'll do 2-3 matches... so, maybe 8 to 12 points total, vs the other classes that typically earn up anywhere from 24 to 30-something points when the fighter survives the round? Well, even with all of that, Granny is still in a good spot. The welterweight class is done, and alger heroes has no featherweights anymore. So, Granny has 3 points above Obsidian, and 1 entire match (so 8-12 points if Rick wins) above Alger. Seems completely doable, as long as Rick doesn't fuck that up...

Zeal Iskander


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