Street Cultivation 2: Chapters 14-15
Added 2019-10-26 22:29:49 +0000 UTCCouple of larger chapters this time, including some worldbuilding I've been wanting to include for a while. I hope everybody has enjoyed the book so far, because the stage is set and several things are about to kick into gear.
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(Moved to RoyalRoad.)
Comments
Its probably only me, but using the term "Big Bang" to describe the beginning of this universe sort of breaks the immersion.
tehlu
2019-11-05 12:56:05 +0000 UTCI figured, just exited for all the careful world building. I'm here for all of it!!
tehlu
2019-11-05 00:26:36 +0000 UTCThe GLA controls the global supply and you'll learn more about them this book. Immortals you're going to have to wait on a bit - right now they're just too high above Rick's practical concerns.
Sarah Lin
2019-11-04 01:39:19 +0000 UTCAnd maybe those that have left the world behind? I always wander why there are no popular legends and icons or does Rick not just not know any. Also , why is Lucrim being harvested now and who controls the worlds global Lucrim supply? Lucrim stock markets??
tehlu
2019-11-04 00:40:21 +0000 UTCIt might not be you - on rare occasions Patreon just doesn't send notifications for some reason. Anyway, glad you liked them!
Sarah Lin
2019-10-29 21:04:24 +0000 UTCSomehow I missed the notifications for the previous chapters... catching up has been a blast!
Zeal Iskander
2019-10-29 20:37:31 +0000 UTCGlad to hear I can be a good part of your day! ^-^
Sarah Lin
2019-10-29 12:41:24 +0000 UTCGreat chapters! Your posts always make my day!
2019-10-29 06:06:41 +0000 UTCI have a lot of fun notes about immortals, but sadly all of that is going to have to wait for the third book. Immortals vary from those who are on top of the current power hierarchy to those who feel the world has left them behind.
Sarah Lin
2019-10-28 22:02:57 +0000 UTCAren't there immortal masters that've been around since the world was saturated with lucrim? Do they care about how it effects the environment? Are they the ones doing it? Are they just crazy old coots that no one listens too? I have so many questions now.
Runcible Technician
2019-10-28 17:01:59 +0000 UTCAt the least these chapters should let us know what Rick thinks the marbles are. He may turn out to be wrong, but since it is told from his point of view, the reader should know what he thinks about them. Right now it is excessively vague.
2019-10-27 05:02:46 +0000 UTCIt will be completely clear in the context of the whole book, but these chapters may need modification so they don't give the wrong impression.
Sarah Lin
2019-10-27 02:43:52 +0000 UTCWhat is the marble supposed to be for?
2019-10-27 01:37:12 +0000 UTCI'll have to review whether or not this is inconsistent.
Sarah Lin
2019-10-27 00:23:18 +0000 UTC
