Street Cultivation 2: Chapters 21-22
Added 2019-11-16 21:49:24 +0000 UTCOne thing about the first book that dissatisfied me a bit was that many of the fights had similar fundamental setups. Now that Rick isn't tied to the Underground, I wanted to include some diversity, and these chapters get into that.
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(Moved to RoyalRoad.)
Comments
Delsin is definitely fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoy him. ^-^ I have in mind a difference in the spirit of their sarcasm, but we'll see if that comes through.
Sarah Lin
2019-11-19 15:06:16 +0000 UTCDelsin is easily becoming a favorite quickly in my mind. Is he fun to write? Hopefully you can keep his sense of humor distinct from his sister (currently it is, but they both achieve humor from sarcasm)
2019-11-19 14:27:22 +0000 UTCI'm surprised neither of them thought to bring a basic shield. Well, I guess Emily does not need one with her aura blades, but it seems like Rick would have benefited from a shield. Maybe a mace, too.
2019-11-17 02:43:58 +0000 UTCNeed a giant one that he can turn into a chair for his sister
Jonathan Timm
2019-11-16 22:47:02 +0000 UTC
