Early Chapter 21: Worth Any Price
Added 2019-04-08 17:01:27 +0000 UTCNew chapter! You may also want to check out the old chapter on RoyalRoad, as there's some art for New Game Minus:
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(Moved to RoyalRoad.)
Comments
Sounds like the flame burns through a lot of lucrim, but also attracts it and make it easier to process. Could the semi-solid shell turn the void flame into an advantage rather than a disability?
Rene Christensen
2019-04-10 11:03:08 +0000 UTCIt's the eye of the tiger, it's the thrill of the fight... *sigh* The crushing poverty is too real sometimes, need to remind myself that wuxia fights are awesome and good stories take buildup.
Runcible Technician
2019-04-08 22:14:13 +0000 UTCThanks, that's encouraging to hear! The story is focused on the development of his power, but I tried to include some other kinds of development as well.
Sarah Lin
2019-04-08 22:07:47 +0000 UTCIt would be unhealthy for most people, but yes, she's a special case due to her condition.
Sarah Lin
2019-04-08 22:07:12 +0000 UTCI like this chapter. Feels like meaningful progress. His growth as a martial artist cum debtor has been interesting, but seeing him facing this responsibility is more satisfying to me.
Drew Allan Coon
2019-04-08 21:07:36 +0000 UTCCan his sister even survive 250k? That seems rather unlikely, given that she doesn't have nearly as much training as her brother... Maybe something about her soul-flame would make her able to resist it? hmm...
Zeal Iskander
2019-04-08 20:24:34 +0000 UTCThere's Conservation of Energy on a deep level, though it's not always clear to average people. Your question's not wrong, though.
Sarah Lin
2019-04-08 18:13:32 +0000 UTCDoes lucrim follow the Law of Conversation of Energy? If so, I wonder what Emily's soul-flame converts it into.
NorkNork
2019-04-08 17:16:34 +0000 UTC
