Early Chapter 32: Granny is Back
Added 2019-05-10 22:30:25 +0000 UTCIs this chapter being posted early? Nope, it's a bonus chapter! Having patrons be two chapters ahead struck me as awkward, so I'm increasing that to three. You guys will be getting another chapter tomorrow as well.
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Comments
That was what I intended, but that doesn't mean it's a good sentence. What I meant to get across was that she can give a "kind smile" that isn't actually kind. Anyway, glad you liked the cocaine line. ^-^
Sarah Lin
2019-05-12 22:04:51 +0000 UTCLoved the bit with Granny Whitney's cocaine, but I caught an error on my second reading of it. "Her kind smile was actually kind instead of threatening, or at least he hoped it was." I'm guessing "kind" was only meant to appear once there.
Desertopa
2019-05-12 18:51:30 +0000 UTCThis makes me think of slimes which force themselves into your orifices and melt your insides
Alexander Dupree
2019-05-10 23:09:07 +0000 UTC>a martial artist with a soft style that damages the internal organs oh fuck hyuuga neji is in this tournament
Pickle
2019-05-10 22:41:31 +0000 UTC
