Early Chapter 35: Power Budgeting
Added 2019-05-17 22:28:20 +0000 UTC(Moved to RoyalRoad.)
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I'll admit this is something I haven't thought about in deep detail, but I had in mind there being very different plans depending on how heavy a lucrim user you are.
Sarah Lin
2019-05-20 11:59:03 +0000 UTCNow I’m curious how health insurance works in this world
Cyclic Addict Recovering
2019-05-20 08:56:18 +0000 UTCYeah, that sentence is a good candidate for rephrasing. Anyway, glad you liked the chapter!
Sarah Lin
2019-05-18 00:38:19 +0000 UTCHmm, I hadn't considered giving it a name. It won't play a major role in this book, but I'll consider it for the future.
Sarah Lin
2019-05-18 00:37:36 +0000 UTCWoo, a theory-and-mechanics-heavy chapter! Point of feedback: I found myself confused by this early sentence. "It was as gloriously stupid as promised and they quoted each other lines from it excessively before they got old." I read it a couple of times before I realized that the referent of "they" switched from the siblings to the lines from the show. I was trying to parse the meaning based on the siblings getting old and was very lost.
Pickle
2019-05-17 23:11:26 +0000 UTCPerhaps consider naming this measure of strength something? (Generation rate + lucrim invested in cores) = a person's Σ #. No one measure is going to be able to capture all aspects of a person. This doesn't take into account Rick's lucrore levels. And when Rick made his foundation more efficient, this measure would drop instead of increase.
NorkNork
2019-05-17 23:06:20 +0000 UTC
