Continuity / Tone Update
Added 2024-06-29 17:30:28 +0000 UTCThere were some errors in continuity and tone in chapters 66 and 75 that needed to be addressed concerning Sonya's character and behavior. These have been updated.
--spoilers ahead--
In short: Sonya's choice to exterminate children is vastly out of character for her and her driving motivation (while enhanced by the desire for revenge) is her grand plan and not revenge in and of itself. Her inner monologue has been improved and she has taken steps to prevent unnecessary cruelty where it doesn't belong. She is Sonya, not Feng Hyunh.
Comments
Out of character for Sonya yes, but for Ishtar? I wonder.
Rainnyth
2024-06-29 18:37:57 +0000 UTCThat's probably for the best if you don't intend to take a hard turn in that direction. Thanks for the update.
M. Gunnarsson
2024-06-29 18:17:17 +0000 UTC
