Legacy Chapter 5
Added 2015-09-04 21:38:29 +0000 UTCThe entirety of Chapter 5. Still needs some editing, so I'm sure there are a few typos.
BIG OL' WARNING - This chapter contains really, really bad things. Like I can't even stress this enough. Saying any more would constitute a spoiler, but just assume that if you're easily bothered by adult themes and violence, this one may not be for you.
Comments
Definitely some hardcore atrocity there. Well-written, but very hard to read.
DiezlWolf
2015-09-07 17:50:01 +0000 UTCIncredible writing on something that must have been incredibly hard to put in to words. Eventhough it's horrible what happened to Kadar it feels as if this moment will have a positive lasting effect between him and Ahsan.
Y-Foxy
2015-09-05 07:31:40 +0000 UTCWith how that one went I don't want to know what happens should Kadar ever find his son Amon. It might get him killed when he tries to kill the one enslaving his beloved son to be a pleasure salve. Fortunately Ahsan is changing the jackal's mind set in small doses and that Kadar didn't fight back as much as he could have just shows that for once he sees hope again to be free.
Rei Loire
2015-09-05 06:41:40 +0000 UTCAgreed
Adam413
2015-09-05 03:17:39 +0000 UTCGreat chapter though a difficult read.
Marcwolf
2015-09-05 00:40:17 +0000 UTCI LOVE YOU RUKIS Edit: I read the story. The abusive parts aren't really descriptive so it isn't as bad for me as others. I'm a little sad though :P, you did at least have Kadar hold Ahsan, so that's a start haha. I just thought they'd kiss this chapter. Probably next :P. Thanks again Rukis <3 Also, I think you should draw either the abusive part or Kadar and Ahsan holding each other.
Adam413
2015-09-05 00:33:59 +0000 UTCRead it. Definitely skipped the details over what exactly happened, easily infer-able. Glad to say the chapter holds up without needing the details. Ahsan is an understanding person, wiser than I expected.
UltraFennec
2015-09-05 00:19:26 +0000 UTCWell, fuck... shit got dark real quick. Expertly written though! I'm addicted to this like the Divine and I can't wait for the moment that they fall in love. They both deserve it. That's if it happens... (PLEASE LET IT BE!)
ArcticSpirit
2015-09-04 23:01:08 +0000 UTCWOW is the only thing I can say. The way you wrote the scene was just handled really well and its even more disturbing to think about things like this happening. On a side note, i'm glad you kept it brief, because its a difficult thing to read. I love the ending as well! Ahsan is such a good character and it goes without saying that those cuddles were both wanted and really adorable. Excellent chapter! Now its just time to illustrate it. . .
Connor Laleff
2015-09-04 22:19:19 +0000 UTC
