Legacy Chapter 6
Added 2015-11-21 05:25:03 +0000 UTCAt laaaaaaast!
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Ah.. But Trust.. Trust your Slaver, Trust a Guard, even trust a fellow salve. You may be asking a BIG thing for Kadar.
Marcwolf
2015-11-22 12:43:33 +0000 UTCFor all his good points - to Kadar - Lochlan is the enemy. Lochlan has 'taken advantage' of Ashan (To Kadar's mindset) and all guards are only out to make his life worse. If Kadar goes to Lochlan who is to say that it will not happen again, that Kadar might be forced to do it regularily or Ashan will be hurt. Plus the shame and humiliation that Kadar has endured. Best stay silent and be more careful incase it happens again.
Marcwolf
2015-11-22 12:41:55 +0000 UTCEvery concept and experience with M/M sex tells Kadar that it is bad, painful, and humiliating. That it's just a need - often taken by people who do not care about you. Basically for Kadar ANY sex is disappointing. Hopefully Ashan can teach Kadar that that is not the case, and when 2 people care a lot about eachother then it something they can share.
Marcwolf
2015-11-22 12:41:31 +0000 UTCHmm.. Now Kadar has a reason to fight the Clan - to protect Ashan. I wonder who demanded that Ashen be taken - the Spy Master?, or does Mother want him back. I also wonder who the 'Liberator' is too that Raja has mentioned. It be an interesting twist if it was Lochan.
Marcwolf
2015-11-22 11:42:25 +0000 UTCI thought I couldn't love this two any more than I already did, but you have a way of peeling away layers that I didn't even know were there to begin with to make it so. You make me feel like I got them at least somewhat figured out and then BAM, you reveal something I never even considered. Superb story telling Rukis! I can't wait to see how this progresses :)
Tiller Brown
2015-11-21 17:26:16 +0000 UTCNow at least it is clear why Kadar is holding the shotel in the picture you once drew. As the story began and as he was content on staying complacent until his contract was paid there could have been no reason for him to participate in the revolt. But if my guess is right about what happens next that would be a reason for him to change his mind.
Rei Loire
2015-11-21 16:12:48 +0000 UTCApparently replying to comment replies is not a thing on patreon... I didn't really think it through. First I thought Kadar could complain to Lochan without disclosing he was the victim. Maybe he could make someone else speak to Lochan, but that probably would only mean Ahsan and that wouldn't help much to keep it a secret. Lochan could probably guess anyway that it'd be about something that happened while he was away and could probably find out that Kadar went to Vikram. On the one hand, Lochan sounds like a guy you could trust to handle it with discretion, on the other hand the major topic here is the trust issues Kadar has, so I can see why he wouldn't do it. I guess I was too focused on Vikram getting what he's had coming. Maybe in the story Kadar could think a bit about his options to report Vikram and then dismiss it. Or maybe my perspective is too different, I don't know..
Cuddly Canine
2015-11-21 11:21:09 +0000 UTCKadar wouldn't have even told Ahsan about what happened to him if the hyena hadn't figured it out on his own. He'd never tell Lochan he was raped.
Rukis
2015-11-21 09:55:01 +0000 UTCIs there a reason that Kadar doesn't go directly to Lochan and demands he does something about the rapist he left in charge?
Cuddly Canine
2015-11-21 09:35:25 +0000 UTCOkay without a doubt. I love Ahsan and want to take him home! Kadar really needs to come out and say that he loves him! And why did it have to end like this? You're cruel Rukis! ;)
Cosmo
2015-11-21 07:47:35 +0000 UTCYay! Great chapter! Definitely worth the wait, but did it have to end on a cliffhanger!? You win this round, Rukis. . . Side note: Ahsan has great taste in men ;)
Connor Laleff
2015-11-21 07:24:25 +0000 UTC
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