Off The Beaten Path Chapter 24-1
Added 2014-05-17 04:07:54 +0000 UTCFirst part of chap. 24/25 (the numbering will be different in the book)
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It's an .odt file. You can read it for example with LibreOffice, Microsoft Office or OpenOffice.
dosenfisch
2014-05-19 21:46:36 +0000 UTCHmm it doesn't seem to want to display. Is it a .pdf or text file or what? Ah well I guess I'll just catch it on FA later or something :\
DiezlWolf
2014-05-17 20:03:21 +0000 UTCJust throwing this out there, the song All of Me by John Legend describes Puck and Ransom perfectly. I always think of them whenever I listen to that song
Connor Laleff
2014-05-17 14:12:48 +0000 UTCI loved the line on page 18-19 "But we all have the same destination". Total flashbacks to Lucius from Heretic
Connor Laleff
2014-05-17 12:59:14 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter! I loved the scene from the mountain. Kinda felt like that was her way of saying goodbye to Grant and the ones she once loved. Being free of the demons of her past at last and just being able to let go. Kinda got an idea of where this is going into the next chapter. :P
Cosmo
2014-05-17 08:29:33 +0000 UTCVery interesting. And now I think we find out what measure of a man Grayson really is. He seems to get on well with Admiral Luther Denholme, and I doubt if Luther would give his trust of friendship easily. Plus Puck has noticed a... Greater interest in him than normal by Grayson. Really looking forward to the rest of this. Many thanks for sharing this with us Rukis Marc p.s. - as I now have 2 copies of Heritic I gave my older one to a dear friend - so another will know of your literary and artistic talents :)
Marcwolf
2014-05-17 07:24:39 +0000 UTCFound a small typo. When she is having the dream on the cliff, right as Crow begins to speak: "Crow said, in a that deep, otherworldly..."
Dr. Anarchy
2014-05-17 04:58:53 +0000 UTC
