Off the Beaten Path chapter 30
Added 2014-10-15 05:50:30 +0000 UTCFA is down, so you guys get to read this before anyone else! Enjoy : ) Again, online, this would be chapter 29. The numbering in the book and the online postings is one off.
Comments
Wow. That was absolutely astounding. Truly a beautifully written story and so very powerful too. You are an amazing author.
N.C.
2014-10-16 04:19:25 +0000 UTCBeautiful!
Dr. Anarchy
2014-10-15 18:43:47 +0000 UTCVery nice. Glad to see all that good characterization showing up in main-line. Both of them really needed to talk to someone that GETS it, understands. Hopefully whatever happens after this point they both recall this when shit hits the fan again.
UltraFennec
2014-10-15 17:56:35 +0000 UTCBeautiful work! And quite profound for someone who is only 30. ;)
Trejaan Cavelion
2014-10-15 11:56:36 +0000 UTCBrilliant X3
Ratshaman
2014-10-15 07:35:12 +0000 UTCRukis you write so beautifully. That is all I have to say, I am at a loss for words to describe how potent the emotions you evoke with your writing. Thank you.
De`Leon
2014-10-15 06:33:55 +0000 UTC
