Off the Beaten Path chapter 30
Added 2014-10-15 05:52:24 +0000 UTCAaaaand an RTF version, for folks who can't open the last one :P
Comments
Oh man. This is a GREAT chapter! Too bad FA is down... again. Isn't this the third, fourth time this year?
Monsieur Foxy
2014-10-15 16:46:44 +0000 UTCIts safe to say that I now 100% ship these two! This chapter was so well written and the similarities between them just makes it more real. It also brings me back to reading Heretic and all the stuff Luther went through compared to how he is today. I just hope Shivah learns to like Luther as well...
Connor Laleff
2014-10-15 15:29:17 +0000 UTCAt last Shivah has found someone who she can converse about her inner demons with. And the wolfhound forces her to see the solution to her problems that she already knew but wanted to accept so far. It seems that both will be able to win against their demons with the help of the other. But how will the cat react when Luther Delholme sees no other choice to save those he has sworn to protect than to destroy the nursery (we already know the outcome and now that that one will become his biggest demon). PS: During reading I found a few things that I think might be written wrong (English isn't my natural tongue). Here the link to the file with corrections made in red: <a href="http://1drv.ms/1sfgkdS" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://1drv.ms/1sfgkdS</a>
Rei Loire
2014-10-15 14:25:32 +0000 UTCReally great chapter. I loved it when Johannes and Shivah were talking and comparing their beliefs. Often what seem to be so different are often so similar. My suspicion re Johannes wife was correct, and I wonder who is looking after the pubs now. One of the older pups - or is Delilah helping as well. It's a really nasty decision they have to make - murder the innocents, or find another way. Looking forward to more chapters *sighs* I wish I could read slower
Marcwolf
2014-10-15 06:20:30 +0000 UTC
