Sinful Behavior (1/4)
Added 2014-10-20 05:47:56 +0000 UTCWhat you've all been waiting for ; ) Okay not all of you. But some of you, I know for certain. This story features two characters from the Red Lantern universe, Shivah/Alongsaa from 'Off the Beaten Path', and Johannes Cuthbert from 'Heretic' and 'Red Lantern'. It chronicles one evening in Serwich, a mere month or so before the colony exodus that brought Luther's fleet to the Shanivaar islands during the events of Red Lantern. This story contains adult content, including swearing, violence, and sexual themes. It is also a pairing with a significant age difference. It is M/F, (straight) and is by no means PWP (porn without plot). I consider this story to be as canonical as possible and true to the characters, but it doesn't need to be canon to the series if you don't want it to be. That's the wondrous thing about side-stories :) Despite not necessarily being canon, this story DOES fit into the canon of 'Off the Beaten Path', somewhere between chapters 29 and 30. All of that being said, I hope some of you enjoy reading this as much as I've enjoyed writing it!
Comments
So, he had a cane amongst his most prized possessions? Almost as though it belonged to someone who meant a great deal to him. I WONDER who that might have been! Hmmm...
Trejaan Cavelion
2014-10-22 11:46:33 +0000 UTCThis is the most amazing pairing that I didn't even know I needed in my life. So much canon.
Annie K
2014-10-20 23:11:24 +0000 UTCSomehow had thathunch already that there might be places where herb is seen just like hour so the h is unpronounced.
Rei Loire
2014-10-20 19:01:48 +0000 UTCIn America (or at least in my neck of the woods) we pronounce 'herb' like ERB, not HERB. So 'an' is appropriate. That's one of those words that gets pronounced differently the world over, though.
Rukis
2014-10-20 18:24:38 +0000 UTCI'm not quite sure I read that right in the end, but it seems that Johannes also won't reveal their findings to Luther. That throws up then up the question how the cattle dog learned about it or if perhaps even Ransom was the one to spill it to the admiral as the only thing that would let the coyote make that choice is when Puck is in mortal danger. Also Proof reafer report: 'and there was an herb garden outside the front stoop' if I'm right it should be 'a herb garden'
Rei Loire
2014-10-20 18:04:54 +0000 UTCFantastic!
Cosmo
2014-10-20 16:04:47 +0000 UTCAhhhh so good! I love the parallels between them. Great writing, Rukis!
Connor Laleff
2014-10-20 11:43:59 +0000 UTCMOAR!
Ratshaman
2014-10-20 08:21:10 +0000 UTCproof-ratter report: "...,deep enough that he'd believed my tales of C`row." sneaky apostrophe intrusion
Ratshaman
2014-10-20 08:10:31 +0000 UTC
