Sinful Behavior Part 2/4
Added 2014-10-27 22:27:38 +0000 UTCPart 2!
Comments
I saw this update, this morning, and squeed out loud
Annie K
2014-10-28 16:18:41 +0000 UTCYes, well, I've been too busy laughing at poor Johannes squirming
Ratshaman
2014-10-28 06:54:58 +0000 UTCI out-proofratted the proofratter ;)
Trejaan Cavelion
2014-10-28 05:34:01 +0000 UTCAlso, Eyeing not eying. accouterments not accoutrements, children's not childrens' and agitation not aggitation
Trejaan Cavelion
2014-10-28 05:33:07 +0000 UTCI absolutely love where he admits to not believing church dogma about non-canines! It made my (already considerable) respect for him grow!
Trejaan Cavelion
2014-10-28 05:14:41 +0000 UTCAll of the references to the events in Heretic, coupled with Shivah's vast oblivion about Luther's situation, are making me smile delightedly. Definitely a testament to how much you make readers love your characters :) I love that the two of them have gray eyes... and Shivah saying that she can still see Grant clearly when she looks at a seven-year-old's drawing is so touching...
Mino
2014-10-28 00:51:23 +0000 UTCGreat Chapter. I love the interplay between Shivah and Johannes. She really is keeping him off guard and pushing his boundaries.. Which is good - often boundaries need to be exercised else they grow hardened and stagnant. I also feel sorry for Johannes, he is in a difficult state.. Love for his wife, remorse, terrified of any actions that might 'discredit' her memory, and so alone. I hope that both of them will find some peace, and maybe even Johannes might respect Grayson a little more.
Marcwolf
2014-10-28 00:50:35 +0000 UTC“Dead loves ones? No thanks,” ... loved maybe?
Ratshaman
2014-10-28 00:22:27 +0000 UTCLOVING the dialogue, Rukis!! This is fantastic, thank you so much for taking the time to write this. You make me go from tearing up about Grant, to just laughing in my seat at the foreplay. I can't wait for more :)
Connor Laleff
2014-10-28 00:21:43 +0000 UTCOh Gods the way this plays out is too prefect! XD
Nolow
2014-10-27 23:37:14 +0000 UTC
