Sinful Behavior Part 4/4
Added 2014-11-19 00:00:48 +0000 UTCThe final bit! I may do an epilogue to this that involves Grayson, just for the fun of it, but this is it for this (as it turns out, very long!) side-story. I'd love to hear what you all thought, and thank you all so much for donating here :) It's really inspired me to do more of these short-stories on the side!
Comments
looks like shivah like canines :) I was good story to read and i cant wait for the next one
Jake
2014-11-23 15:13:06 +0000 UTCawwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was great. Everybody had fun, everybody learns something new, they both get to mock Grayson, perfect.
UltraFennec
2014-11-22 06:08:27 +0000 UTCJohannes has really found the perfect bedmate in Shivah. She is the only one that can hold up against him when he is in those nightmares. Perhaps with that closeness his own demons will abate to become more bearable.
Rei Loire
2014-11-19 21:16:19 +0000 UTCFantastic read! Can't wait for the next one! :)
Cosmo
2014-11-19 16:46:22 +0000 UTCSO CUTE!!! That ending was just fantastic. Great work!
Connor Laleff
2014-11-19 15:57:53 +0000 UTCThat end...
Wǝidz
2014-11-19 12:53:47 +0000 UTCpoor Grayson, everybody making fun on his account X3
Ratshaman
2014-11-19 08:01:35 +0000 UTCOh man, your idea of an epilogue with Grayson's got my mind going. "Where were you last night?" "Smell for yourself." :p Taste of his own medicine.
whatfullname
2014-11-19 06:12:28 +0000 UTCThis entire story was SO FUN! I love all your writing, but this may be my favorite. They work so well together! It's touching and funny and sweet, and I really loved it.
Not A Lizard
2014-11-19 06:09:19 +0000 UTCI really enjoyed this story, and will personally consider it cannon. Shiva has found someone who she can trust and relate to... and have a good deal of fun with. Reading through the sex was fantastic, but for me the best part is seeing both of them figure out they can be on equal footing with each other.
Kathleen Denney
2014-11-19 04:33:56 +0000 UTCBeautiful ending.. Not just for the sex but also that Shivah and Johannes can respect each other on a new level. He has found someone who does not need protection from his nightmares.. And Shivah has found a place of safe haven in the colony where she can let her guard down and trust. Many thanks for sharing this with us..
Marcwolf
2014-11-19 00:55:13 +0000 UTCI have been impatiently waiting for this for weeks! Another great addition to the OTBP storyline, whether it's canon or not :)
James
2014-11-19 00:13:39 +0000 UTC
