Legacy Chapter 8
Added 2016-04-07 22:28:54 +0000 UTCComments
The pacing is very good in this chapter. Although there are many instances of killing, none feel contrived, trivial, or excessive, despite it being very gory. I really love the fact that every single action gives us a better look into the characters, I'm thinking of the way he dispatches the first two guards. Once again, wonderful writing!
CastJudgment
2016-05-16 19:51:49 +0000 UTCI love how you peel back each layer of their back story, changing and altering what I thought drove them to do what they do. Kadar has easily become one of my favorite characters of yours. I can't wait to see what unfolds next!
Tiller Brown
2016-04-12 00:39:27 +0000 UTCWhooo... Well worth the wait. Lots of interesting interaction between Kadah and Lochan - at least we better understand what drives them.
Marcwolf
2016-04-07 23:19:30 +0000 UTCYaaaaaaaaaaaas
Connor Laleff
2016-04-07 23:05:42 +0000 UTC
