'By Touch' Part 3
Added 2016-04-13 19:19:24 +0000 UTCI am incapable of writing short adult stories, as it turns out. Sorry this took so long, but I'm finally happy with it :) I hope you all enjoy!
Comments
It was wonderful. I especially liked how both of them get off without any mounting, both were great methods ;) I'll just note about these lines: I eye his own claws, sharp like most of the tribes prefer to keep theirs. < that prefer? He’s got a cute little muzzle, though. < don't think the comma should be there?
Skie
2016-05-07 17:55:31 +0000 UTCAwww that was amazing and such a sweet ending. And it really tugged on my heart strings. Great as usual :) Though i will NEVER stop asking for art of these two ;)
Connor Laleff
2016-04-14 02:20:28 +0000 UTCAh.. was not sure of the actual timeline. It could have been that Johannes knowing that Luther had had a 'dalliance' and seeing how Johannes now had no-one he took the risk.. Or Johannes having had his 'dalliance' decided that he could not be too hard on Luther But on you - Rukis - will know *Winks* :)
Marcwolf
2016-04-14 00:10:32 +0000 UTCLol, Johannes was also, you know, guilty :p. Considering his own 'dalliance'
Rukis
2016-04-13 23:57:24 +0000 UTCGreat conclidion to the story. I love the way you investigate the conflict for Luther and the others. Poor Joahhnes -he really is trying to be 'nice' to Luther.
Marcwolf
2016-04-13 23:22:00 +0000 UTCGreat conclidion to the story. I love the way you investigate the conflict for Luther and the others. Poor Joahhnes -he really is trying to be 'nice' to Luther.
Marcwolf
2016-04-13 23:21:59 +0000 UTCWhat a wonderful ending to what started as a bit of smut. Just so well written, you really feel for both of them at the end.
Y-Foxy
2016-04-13 19:43:44 +0000 UTC
