Legacy Chapter 12
Added 2016-05-19 19:28:06 +0000 UTCRaja is the roommate from hell.
As always, comments are appreciated! Helps me catch things before I post it on FA.
Comments
id be lying if the beginning of this chapter didnt remind me of my roommates in college...
Ty Laurich
2016-06-01 17:19:26 +0000 UTCAnother awesome chapter. I was wondering what would finally drive them from the "Lotus Lands" (Greek reference for fellow nerds out there). I can see in the future that Raja might fight with a bit more conviction in this coming fight to protect the one place he feels happy. Hopefully he doesn't get Lochan-ed. Looking forward to seeing who the Northerners are.
CastJudgment
2016-05-25 17:00:01 +0000 UTCTook me a while, but just finished and it was a great chapter (unsurprisingly). Kadar and Ahsan are an adorable couple and I like the uncertainty of who is attacking and who they are there for. I do hope that if and when they escape it'll be with Raja. He's a dick, but he's our dick <3
Connor Laleff
2016-05-23 03:14:21 +0000 UTCYup, you were right. Kadar is quite the romantic XD. And I had a feeling that the peace was nearing an end. Time to start nervously awaiting each chapter again!
Tiller Brown
2016-05-20 15:14:38 +0000 UTCCertainly not a bad one for some of us XD
ProwlingPaws
2016-05-19 22:32:17 +0000 UTClol, freudian slip :P
Rukis
2016-05-19 20:17:02 +0000 UTCthanks!
Rukis
2016-05-19 20:16:52 +0000 UTCThere's one line where it says "I've have seen that kind of wound before". It appears that the line was altered, though not corrected. c:
Baylock
2016-05-19 19:59:05 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter-love Kadar's romantic side and can't wait to see what happens next :D Did see one typo-it says "feet" instead of "feed" :)
ProwlingPaws
2016-05-19 19:50:06 +0000 UTC
