'Kindred' Part 3
Added 2019-10-01 08:01:47 +0000 UTCTechnically this includes up to part 2 of chapter 2. I'll have art of the characters for you all soon ;)
The conspiracy begins!
Comments
Thank you for that! See, this is why I need beta readers
Rukis
2019-10-06 23:58:34 +0000 UTCI see one minor discrepancy. You describe his room as having no windows but then have Finnigan staring out a window at the end. Otherwise, this is an amazing start and I'm hopelessly hooked like many of your others.
KiskaBeaust
2019-10-05 12:41:26 +0000 UTCMany thanks for letting us readers in to your world's again :)
Marcwolf
2019-10-01 12:17:25 +0000 UTCGreat start.. I am hooked already.
Marcwolf
2019-10-01 12:16:49 +0000 UTC
