'Illicit Alliance' Chapters 1-3
Added 2020-10-29 02:04:20 +0000 UTCSo it's looking like this'll be a four-parter. Please continue to feed me comments/critiques, I've been loving all the feedback I've been getting so far and it really encourages me to write more. <3
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Kafele is new to this book, but he's one of Luther's past port liaisons. Kind of a pre-Amon, as callous as that sounds. Except in better circumstances (I.E. not indentured)
Rukis
2021-12-31 21:17:12 +0000 UTCWhere is Kafele in his past? He's new to me
Dallas Bolen
2021-12-31 08:12:36 +0000 UTCI finally had time to sit down and read this one. I cant wait for more!
WildFox
2020-11-20 04:59:29 +0000 UTCOooph. Fantastic. Way to build up a cliffhanger XD. Can't wait for part 4!
Randall
2020-11-01 03:11:28 +0000 UTCUgh, I SO badly want a pic of Luther getting ear scritches.
Jem
2020-10-29 03:51:28 +0000 UTCHere I though Kafele had disguised himself as the vixen dancer that went off with the otter
Beau Regard
2020-10-29 02:31:42 +0000 UTC
